listenin...
beat is dope, i got it also haha
voice is pretty coo
lyrics were nice
flow and delivery is pretty decent
i think only thing wrong might be the quality, would sound ALOT better if upped, no hate tho haha its all good
keep droppin!

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well beat is coo nahmean...yea i would agree wit the other homie about being on beat nahmean...but u know what this just might be your style so i aint gonna knock it...delivery could be better and emotion is aight lyrics are aight ASwell for this beat...props on work keep doin your thing..keep it moving

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Don't Mistake my Confidence as Arrogance

Yeah that's why I'm more involved in the industry than you are because I suck.........right. Silk Went platinum because No Limit was the "in" thing at the moment and he had alotta guest features.... You just don't know how to take criticism and everytime someone says somethin you don't like, you take it overly personal. Go campaign for your RV Award some more, cuz I won't bother givin you feedback anymore since you act 10 years younger than you are.

^hahaha Your In The Industry You Gay Fag Im Involved Way More Then You Know Im Meeting With Exes Bout Record Deals For A.i Your On Rv Doing Nothing Hahaha Like I Said Set Thet Battle Up Or Stay Out My Thread

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LMAO @ you and A.I. gettin a deal, son I got an interview with def jam plus I'm signed to another label, I don't have time to battle cry babies so pz

^your Lieing And Your Scared Of Me Set The Battle Up Or Go Die Faggot

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The beat is tight...nice sample on the hook...you still use dat off low but it really hurt you on this track IMO...your emotion was good but wasn't used right...you was overemphasizing alot of times....emotion is always good but if its undisciplined it jus seems like ya yelling for no reason.....you shoulda been more melodic instead of beig more intense but it was a decent track with some touching up it could be ill.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...444#post1994444

^battle me bitch and stop ducking me faggot

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Typing as I listen: Not big on the "beat". That high-pitched voice shit went out in like..01. The music is fine - the vocal sample laid over it sounds cheesy and plaid - that's what I don't liek about it. Your flow on the first verse is off. Same as it's ever been on every track I've EVER heard from you so it wasn't a big shock - especially since you only have one flow. Second verse's flow is even more off than the first and your deliv sounds whiney. I hate syl stretching and you use it on every line. It's a sign of amatuer deliv imo. Sounds liek you're trying too hard. Track's lyrically on, but the deliv was boring and borderline repulsive since it had the same miss-flow on every syl-stretched line. Not for nothing man, but I just dont' feel your style at all. Nothing personal - just speaking my honest feelings on it. Seems like you never corrects it's glaring flaws and you have no diversity at all. Same shit every track. Here's where you cry about my feed. 1

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^your fucking garbage still mad i gave you that loss kid you fucking suck stupid nerd if you dont like my style why you post in al my threads?to leave hate feed you dumb fucking loser nerd homo and your fucking garbage wack i beat you in text and id own you in audio quality dont mean shit you dont get deals on quality fag you get deals when your nice and you suck period............

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^^:sigh: Like I said:



Ain't hate son. I explained exactly why I didn't liek your shit - where as you leave feed (like your above cry-fest of a post) and don't say shit. That's the difference between hate and honest feed. Hurt your feelings?? awwwww.....

BTW - how'd you beat me when you yourself admitted that you told dudes to vote for you? smh...

In any case, I ain't gonna sit here and slapfight with someone who works at Wendys. You up your tracks for feed then get pissed when you get it. If you don't like my feed then dont ask for it. On the other hand, if you got all giddy and one of your man-boobs popped outta your brothers borrowed wife-beater - then feel free to drop a callout to which you'll QUICKLY get your shit smashed. Uno.

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Remember what happened last time you were beefing in this forum cali? -- You've been warned again -- If you don't like the feedback put the person who left it on your ignore list and forget about it, if this shit continues Im closin threads again.

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C.A.L.I the battle is up go check in, and thanks for the name-callin jus shows how mature you are to take criticism