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9th Degree 5 83.33%
E Looch 1 16.67%
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Old 07-21-05, 04:00 PM   #16
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sorry i couldnt vote for my buddy Loochy

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Old 07-21-05, 06:18 PM   #17
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checking pollsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

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Old 07-21-05, 06:19 PM   #18
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my bad ya'll cliqued the wrong button................
 
Old 07-21-05, 06:19 PM   #19
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Looch:
i gotta give it up ya bars are really very rare...
..ly consitent career not so Sonny now that lines arent bein Cher'd
meh, weak, wordplay was coo', wording was fucked and it didnt really hit
u could get stoned like jesus fuck it ill give u 1 hell of a pimp slap
denail letters from universal the only time u C-notes off rap
meh, wording was fucked, weak, just a "meh" bar
take ya loose leaf paper make an airplane an toss it in the air
truste me right there be the only way ya flow goin somewhere
umm, this was wack man, straight up wack
aint ya fault ya family tree all bark an no bite i wish u wood
do what u say in ya raps this lazy mechanic never around a hood
played lines = wack
no problem for me like blank math books i add up to your defeat
u stray from audio fuck a defibralator couldnt help u stay on beat
this was "meh" again
so stay with text it suits u dont get ties with a mic keep ya luck
slam an bounce ya head off my av so u get more bang for ya buck
meh, wack, didnt feel this either, it was "meh"

9th:
6 minutes left? That's all I need, I know this fella is lame
So I'll bring E to the L, like I'm spellin' his name
These L initial lines are getting played and not so fresh even when flipped but this still came out decent
He better have changed, elevated 'cuz he's dumb like inbred kinfolk
I asked if he caught my drift and he opened up a window
made me almost smile, a borderline decent line
We know what your in-fo, like I'm givin' information
Battle me? Looch is fuckin' Goofy more than Disney fornication
didn't hit, I've seen similair concepts but with differant wording, this was "ok"
Really you're like bad bombs, you blow with no direction
Looch's bars never connect, like bad cell phone reception
NO!

v/9th degree, for having 2 or 3 decent bars, wich beat looch's 0 decent bars or 1 decent bar, I cant remember, anyways, looch you came wack, your wording was mad fucked and shit looked force, I go with 9th obviously.
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Old 07-21-05, 06:20 PM   #20
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looch had some straight wordplay but it wasnt really hittin...
the opened up tha window line was tha best in this battle... im not votin but 9th wins from that window line...
 
Old 07-21-05, 06:29 PM   #21
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6 minutes left? That's all I need, I know this fella is lame
So I'll bring E to the L, like I'm spellin' his name
He better have changed, elevated 'cuz he's dumb like inbred kinfolk
I asked if he caught my drift and he opened up a window

v.

Nothing

9th came okay with those two decent bars. The first was actually dope but the catch the drift concept ive seen before. Flow was fine, wordplay was coo. Just an average verse as Ive seen u come much much better. The last two bars were more of a blah gotta make sum lines type. Meta's usually end up that way. You just had the witty verse.

E Looch came weak. He didnt connect on his wordplay. His opener was a good concept but the wording was way off. Very stretched as well. Flow wasnt that great throughout. The closer was coo but really didnt deliver a hit. That was pretty much the scenerio throughout your whole verse. The older, wack style of RV got you the loss. Those lines might have been considered dope back then, but that style fell off a long time ago. So get back to battling, adapt, and elevate cause you didnt come close on this one.
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Old 07-21-05, 06:52 PM   #22
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woooooooooooooow

didnt see this comin

I'm as surprised as you are...if not, more surprised.
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Old 07-22-05, 10:15 PM   #23
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werd to bad cell phone reception........... wackest bar ive heard from 9th
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Old 07-23-05, 12:35 AM   #24
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wtf, looch battling?
 
Old 07-24-05, 02:45 AM   #25
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lmao ^ word

comedy from the voters young kids now imember why i stoped battlin on this kiddy board


and that catch the drift concept came from me
 
Old 07-24-05, 03:51 AM   #26
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but 9th made it 10000 times better then u eer said it...as did many other kids
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Old 07-24-05, 10:23 PM   #27
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Meh, upping.
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Old 07-24-05, 10:56 PM   #28
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but 9th made it 10000 times better then u eer said it...as did many other kids



um no

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Old 07-25-05, 04:16 PM   #29
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Voted For: E Looch

wow this was a pretty tight battle.. 9th.. i felt u could have taken this.. had u came a bit harder.. some of ur lines i was really feeling.. but there was a bar in there that i thought was pretty lame and that was ur opener..

E-Looch.. well i havent seen u around much.. but i definitely dont think ur rusty.. u had some pretty nice concepts.. that mechanic line was nice.. and i liked the sonny and cher line..

Overall.. this was a pretty good battle. i just felt looch came harder.. and just edged out 9th....
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Old 07-26-05, 12:48 PM   #30
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Aiight.. One sided.. Looch, are you just trying to be too complex or is that actually just jibberish to make people get the impression your dissing him? Nothing at all in your verse interested me. You were attempting some decent concepts in your verse but the way you worded it was complete garbage. I think this is one of those things where you understand what your saying, but other people dont. And dont listen to any dickriders that vote for you, because their not being honest. This is comming from someone who doesent know you nor care for your feelings. Clean up your style big time. Start doing punches that arnt just a jumble of words, you would never ever ever ever ever ever ever see a rapper attempt to spit lines like that in a free style or pre written diss.. and thats because THOSE LINES ARE WEIRD. yadig?

9th, first bar was aiight, third line was stretched, you might wanna check that, the punch was meh on that bar too, third bar wasnt bad, the set up was coo.. Could of used a better concept for the punch, forth bar was aiight, nothing really wowed me, but you did a decent job, and your one up simply because your bars actually had something behind them.

Looch, this is by no means a hate vote and I'm being brutally honest with you for your own good not mine. Take it how you want to take it. But I'm out. Peace.
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