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Old 09-01-04, 10:57 PM   #31
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thanks a lot for the feedback...but I am confused as how the subject matter is not consistent...the subject is rooted into a story of mine...and every line has something to do with how i feel about the story...emotionally or physically..or it is explaining the story.....I'm not arguing with you....I am just wondering what stuck out to you as "Non consistent"
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Old 09-02-04, 10:50 AM   #32
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Shits tite, i wouldnt nominate it as best though but i was feelign ya shitit was deep, ya was ok...
How long did it take you to write this and be honest now....
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Old 09-02-04, 11:52 AM   #33
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thats was deep shit, it was tight, keep it up~
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Old 09-03-04, 08:25 PM   #34
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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.


"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox


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Old 09-03-04, 10:24 PM   #35
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Deep drop...nice idea...good flow. I give that like a 8.5/10. That's like one of the best drops i've seen since i've been on da board. Keep it up
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Old 09-04-04, 09:23 PM   #36
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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.


"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox


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Old 09-04-04, 10:02 PM   #37
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nice drop man keep droppin aight i likie to see it...
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Old 09-05-04, 07:40 PM   #38
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uppin....
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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.


"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox


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Old 09-05-04, 07:50 PM   #39
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nice drop
i could see wat u meant
nice overalll
how long it took to make it


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Old 09-05-04, 11:42 PM   #40
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pretty dope... good rhyme scheme... keep up the good work.. and ps. join my crew... just playing pc..
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Old 09-06-04, 04:51 AM   #41
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paramik....took me about 35 minutes..i woke up one time at 530 in the morning..and started writin
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Old 09-07-04, 09:50 PM   #42
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upping since i feel this is geting left out
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Old 09-08-04, 11:55 PM   #43
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that shit was hot, give u a 10/10. Love is complicated ain't really much u can do about except don't love at all or go with it. My fave line was
"Says she cares about" me, but she thinks labels are stupid..
Feelin hurt I make a hitlist sayin "first dude is cupid"..
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Old 09-10-04, 03:12 AM   #44
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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.


"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox


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Old 09-11-04, 06:32 PM   #45
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uppin for you sons of bitches
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