Voted For: C.A.L.I

C.A.L.I

Herbish faker damn perpatraitior yous a 'Sonic' groupie
'Datruth' you couldnt smoke a herb in a chronic movie!!(1)
^good opener

Occupations listed as 'Grilling Mathafuckas' ......damn yous a loser(2)
Bow to to my 'Godlyness' my 'Disciple' you from the land of 'Hoover'(3)
^good good...
'B' you 'Dizzy' think i would just give you a win(4)
Ya records like old rims...............no spins!!(5)
^hehe,okay

'Fuxjustaword'.....well it is till i 'Fux' 'Fux' up with verbs
Cuz 'Fux' just a 'Fux' up 'Fux'ed up 'Fux'ing computer nerd
^not really feelin it

This real 'Easy' for 'E' no wonder you changed ya sig picture(6)
Ya verse is looking 'BAD BOY' and i aint talking bout 'Big' wit ya
^damn,nice closer

Overall solid drop: structure n flow were tight, vocab was good. Had hardhitting punches and mad personals in there, also nice wordplay...


FuxJustAWord

CALI thinks he's ahead me, his old avvy thinks he beheads me
the "king of Beef' ? I know! we've all heard about Wendy's
^nice opener

So it tempts me, to see if u "bite," wen u've got more beef than fuckin cattle
Don't look back after dumpin shit? so ill be the only one to up this battle
^haha,funny...

Givin u parkinson’s, ur left shook and rattled, thats y u have no precision or aim
cuz in this battle, ur punches land farther apart than ur location and name
^decent one

cmon mayne, u even think ur a n****, i figure uve got ur freckles mixin with facts
but to step back, its no suprise, wen u have the whole site "listed" as black"
^good good

atleast a job "well done" with the "beef" there, but nothin surrenders my brew
and wit my "raw" lyrics ur chances are "rare",................................................. ..................... .........cuz my punches'll tenderize you
^bleh closer

Structure,flow n vocab were tight. Had some creative punches and mad funny personals in there,not really feeling your closer though...

Damn,this is a close battle...both had mad good punches and personals, creativity goes to Fuxjustaword but i was feeling Cali's flow more...uhm, in the end i go with Cali,no hate, was dope battle from both!

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Voted For: C.A.L.I

Herbish faker damn perpatraitior yous a 'Sonic' groupie
'Datruth' you couldnt smoke a herb in a chronic movie!!(1)
^^nice punch/personal
Occupations listed as 'Grilling Mathafuckas' ......damn yous a loser(2)
Bow to to my 'Godlyness' my 'Disciple' you from the land of 'Hoover'(3)
^^decent punch..good personal
'B' you 'Dizzy' think i would just give you a win(4)
Ya records like old rims...............no spins!!(5)
^^weak punch....decent personal
'Fuxjustaword'.....well it is till i 'Fux' 'Fux' up with verbs
Cuz 'Fux' just a 'Fux' up 'Fux'ed up 'Fux'ing computer nerd
^^damn nice multi's and personal
This real 'Easy' for 'E' no wonder you changed ya sig picture(6)
Ya verse is looking 'BAD BOY' and i aint talking bout 'Big' wit ya
^^good punch...okay personal

you came pretty well equipped with personals.....they were non stop......good to see personal usage.....good flow......structure i would say is your biggest flaw....your punches were good....some werent but the majority were.....like how you threw in punches with the personals to up the effect of them....goos drop....pretty solid cept for structure.....

CALI thinks he's ahead me, his old avvy thinks he beheads me
the "king of Beef' ? I know! we've all heard about Wendy's
^^nice humerous punch/personal
So it tempts me, to see if u "bite," wen u've got more beef than fuckin cattle
Don't look back after dumpin shit? so ill be the only one to up this battle
^^nice personal....decent punch
Givin u parkinson’s, ur left shook and rattled, thats y u have no precision or aim
cuz in this battle, ur punches land farther apart than ur location and name
^^decent punch..could been worded a lil better
cmon mayne, u even think ur a n****, i figure uve got ur freckles mixin with facts
but to step back, its no suprise, wen u have the whole site "listed" as black"
^^nice wordplay.....decent punch
atleast a job "well done" with the "beef" there, but nothin surrenders my brew
and wit my "raw" lyrics ur chances are "rare",....................
.................................................. .........cuz my punches'll tenderize you
^^good punch...but self glorify brought it down some


aight you had a pretty decent verse.....had some good personals....a little humor is always nice to see......you had better structure.....i think you coulda worded you punches to up the effect of them a lil more....but you had good flow too.......not bad just not good enough for my vote

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checkin dem pollz...dont feel like voting

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Voted For: FuxJustAWord

FUx-Alright now, good punches with some decent wordplays. Personals was good too. Punches i have to say it was decent. Flow was a lil chopped up, dont stretch your lines that much. Personals went real deep and insulted him with very decent punches.


Cali- Good punches, with some decent personals. Flow was good. Wordplays was good. good work on the multi'z.





overall=This battle was close, both head'z had some decent punches with some decent personals. Flow was from both head'z was good. Wordplay from "fux" was decent. In my eyes, i think "FUX" won this battle, because he had some decent punches had more effect with some decent wordplays. I aint hating on cali, but your punches came a little "uneffective" you had good punches, but i think "FUX" punches came harder and more effective. wun

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^thats mad lame but anyways good battle fux i read your verse again and its pretty decent this will be real close here

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Voted For: C.A.L.I

C.A.L.Is Verse

Herbish faker damn perpatraitior yous a 'Sonic' groupie
'Datruth' you couldnt smoke a herb in a chronic movie!!(1)
^ good opener with the name flip punch and personal

Occupations listed as 'Grilling Mathafuckas' ......damn yous a loser(2)
Bow to to my 'Godlyness' my 'Disciple' you from the land of 'Hoover'(3)
^ aight punch could be worded better though

'B' you 'Dizzy' think i would just give you a win(4)
Ya records like old rims...............no spins!!(5)
^ liked this punch

'Fuxjustaword'.....well it is till i 'Fux' 'Fux' up with verbs
Cuz 'Fux' just a 'Fux' up 'Fux'ed up 'Fux'ing computer nerd
^ lol @ the fux a lot (punch) lol na was good kinda Limp Bizkit shit there

This real 'Easy' for 'E' no wonder you changed ya sig picture(6)
Ya verse is looking 'BAD BOY' and i aint talking bout 'Big' wit ya
^ Nice closer good wordplay aight punch/personal

Overall: C.A.L.I
Some nice wordplay good useage of personals flow was good some aight punches all round good verse from ya

FuxJustAWords Verse

CALI thinks he's ahead me, his old avvy thinks he beheads me
the "king of Beef' ? I know! we've all heard about Wendy's
^ LOL decent opener but the Wendys thing beginning to get played now but nice anyway good personal

So it tempts me, to see if u "bite," wen u've got more beef than fuckin cattle
Don't look back after dumpin shit? so ill be the only one to up this battle
^ stretched...punch was average cattle/battle basic rhyme coulda been better

Givin u parkinson’s, ur left shook and rattled, thats y u have no precision or aim
cuz in this battle, ur punches land farther apart than ur location and name
^ nice punch/personal however stretched again affected flow

cmon mayne, u even think ur a n****, i figure uve got ur freckles mixin with facts
but to step back, its no suprise, wen u have the whole site "listed" as black"
^ worked as a punch kinda personal wordplay on the blacklist was aight blocked the N word good move in my opinion people get funny on the white sayin N thing (which i agree wit)

atleast a job "well done" with the "beef" there, but nothin surrenders my brew
and wit my "raw" lyrics ur chances are "rare",....................
.................................................. .........cuz my punches'll tenderize you
^ Wendy's flippin extreme there nice punches from personals but the .................................wasn't needed it jus fux'ed up ya structure in my opinion

Overall: FuxJustAWord
Another good verse jus as good only thing is i didn't feel your layout it effected ya structure and flow and in text it is important people do look for that and it slipped in this battle some decent personals but the amount of people who use Wendy's on C.A.L.I is startin to get boring...

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^^^ in his made up crew......... lol, jp....... thanx for the votin people.......just had a wake for my grandma so its been tough....... good verse by u too man..... but u know im hopin for 3 runnin votes now

man......i had my lines alot shorter before.....but i thought that people favored kinda long lines for text, so i tried to add in multis or metas in the middle for someofem........ but nice battle, uppin for atleast two more votesfor me........ dont really care for the win anymore

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Voted For: C.A.L.I

CALI gets this one becuase I think his lyrical was a lil dope, and his flow sounded better then me and he just came harder on this one and hits where extremely good and opener-closure was better and his personels just got their before you did you had a lil but some of ur stuff did not rhyme but keep workin on it homes. but overall I give it to cali and oh yea hit up on my sigs please peace.

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damn...... i woulda rathered just to keep it at 4-2....... i thought the rest of the votes wereok........ but im not the one who chooses....uppin

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