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09-12-04, 05:14 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 9275 0703
upping this shit
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09-12-04, 05:17 PM
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IP: C56C 93CC
this was a dope..read...pretty long ...but it was worth it....structure was on point...multies were decent ...wordplay..was on the money....feelings and emotions..were really..good and so was the feelings going into the drop..overall very good drop.... 8.5/10
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09-14-04, 06:47 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 9275 0703
upping feedback on this shit
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09-21-04, 08:03 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
that was dope man i liked yer verse and fer a 1st ever it was dope man
 and i mean it its got complex words. but i tryed showing my freinds this song there wit me now and they say it sucks but i told them they dont understand rap then and there like no we do hes wack thats what they said but me i say yer abotu in this songs a 9/10 maybe a lil more but not 10 thats hard to get but ya chekc my piece thanks~1~ Luv |
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09-21-04, 10:10 PM
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IP: A063 529A
this shit was long but nice flow good wordplay creativeness was above average and the whole verse was worth a read but the lenth wasnt but all together nice drop...
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09-23-04, 05:52 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: D26C 0847
that was very very good piece...agree with^^^^^..but also agree with everyone else....1
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09-25-04, 02:52 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 7975 32E9
uppping.......
get fedeback on this siht
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09-25-04, 03:06 PM
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The Topical Juggernaut
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IP: D35B 3F85
Leangthy, yes, nice idea though. I read it two times before replying. To me it seems choppy, not the flow itself, the flows good. The story is choppy, like the descriptions. Nice vocab and imagery for the most part, if you would have made the story more fluid to make the imagery stand out more I think it would have been 9.5+. Good shit anyways my man, keep droppin. Peace. 7.7 overall.
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09-28-04, 09:59 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 3375 4717
iight nice feedback though now i know where to improve...
runing for nomination of best OPen MIc award of august.. IM NOT telling you to vote for me only if you fell this is the open mic of august then you can vote...
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09-30-04, 07:26 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 2436 5733
word that shits aight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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09-30-04, 08:07 PM
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My Dick Stay Wet
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IP: 28AD 5545
hot shit..i'd like to see more of dis.....das like a song and a half if u add chrous to it..lol...good shit tho...~1~
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10-01-04, 08:50 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 3375 4717
upping.........
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10-03-04, 12:09 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 3375 4717
upping gotdamn you newbs sleep on every shit
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10-03-04, 09:41 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 3375 4717
uuppping...........
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10-04-04, 08:28 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 3375 4717
do i have to post 4 times for you fags to peep this shit out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
scenario you owe my a feedback snd so does 6 other newbs.....
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