yo ill try too but it wont let me................................................ ........

Voted For: SONIC


36-1, not ne more, cause im bout to leave ya record image buckled..
howbout you better high "TAIL" it SONIC, cos im introducin my KNUCKLES..
8/10
he prolly lookin for posts of me saying shit in an outdated place..
battling me aint safe like mouth washing with razor blades..
5/10
im tellin you, honests my word, this cat really gets hurt with the verbs..
Im bout to leave him street smart, like i cracked his skull on the curb..
6/10
Im bout to leave his verse broken, like i was attackin his limbs..
Iv seen better punchlines spawned from the back of my timbs..*
6/10
like you that white chick kobe banged,you fightin wit false "blows"..
nigga got more name changes than peoples thoughts bout mikes nose..
7/10
i've seen your material, its not cloth, its totally crap..
droppin ya lyrics like a turd in bathrooms,but the toilets just toss em back!..
4/10
you prolly gonna throw a punch like "you drop real calamitys"..
blowing holes in ya verse, like i was yo simmity sam with this..
this "sucker" cant "spit" at all... cos hes up performin fucks n fellatio.......... sonic aint tryna battle... all this bitch wanna do is increase his dick to but ratio.... ???
6/10


This dudes young and poor, Vegetables Is your only "Salary"
It's Sad to See, But every verse you write is a true "Calamity"
7/10
This is Higher than Music man, the Fire is Fusin
U're like a long distant runner in last place, u'r "Tired" of Loosin
7/10
I'm Still Smart you're Still Dumb, you Still Lost, I Still Won
U couldn't even beat me in a battle me if u had a Real Gun
6/10
Just listen to me ya'll as I spit This Truth
Ya name was "Hoops" coz MC's rap circles around u In Booths
6/10
Wit Weaker Raps, U Peak where I Emmerge At
U'r So garbage that when yo tape plays, the Speaker Cracks
6/10
When I throw Acid, u can't fight Back wit Spit
Oh, did u tell them U'r addicted to "Crack".. Ass Crack That Is
7/10
From these Lips I Bust the Sickest Stuff, U should be Givin Up
U'r "Record's" more fucked up than discs that Skip too Much
7/10
My shit is Hot and Scorchin and I'm leavin you In Torment
I knock out teeth, have u wearing more wires than Informants
8/10
This is the main fuckin reason that I kill Fags
Calamity's like Lesbian Studs, he'll never be a "Real Man"
7/10
If u ain't prepared for battle, you really should Surrender Then
Or i'll just send you "home" faster than Rickey Henderson
10/10*Damn lol*

this battle was a good one but it came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay i felt calamity's punches were there but they were a lil 2 played and u could of used better wordplay.
Sonic had better wordplay and his punches hit like a muthafucka
which in my eyes he took this battle hands down

Calamity=60/100
Sonic=90/100

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Voted For: calamity

my vote goes to calamity he was betta in this battle it was aight not tha greatest but not bad sonic your structure was off witch fucked ya flow u had no vocab no complexity really no word play a couple punches but not many and i thought they didnt hit very hard overall your verse really disapointed me fa real

calamity u had a pretty good verse u had a better structure then sonic by far witch made ya flow smoother and nice to read u had betta vocab not much wordplay same wit complexity your punches though was betta then sonics they hit herder in my mind


structure calamity
flow calamity
punches calamity
vocab calamity
complexity none
word play neither
enjoyed calam's
overall vote calamity

go on with that dick riding shit, he didn't have any vocab either, and the stucture was the same..

Voted For: calamity

yo this goes to CALAMITY
i mean yes sonic had the better personals and all
but clamity had harder and better punches,he flowed better overall,and he had a more complex structure and verse..\both had creativity which i liked but my vote goes to...

clamity

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aight... uppin leave a link, drop a vote.....

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Yo Calam, if you win, no hard feeling.. I just honestly didn't wanna lose to someone 13-10, also I honestly thought that you first off all were blocking people, or that you were trying to limit who can vote for me.. but strobe explained the shit and it's all good.. i can take another loss, i most definatley ain't that, just a lot of people on here accuse me of cheating and all type of shit, but they usually cheat worst than me, so i'm usually cautious and confrontational.. I never was tryna cheat though cuz, one..

....uppin for honestg votes...

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Voted For: SONIC

pesonally i thought sonic rhymed betta and calamity had good structure so this battle was even. my vote goes to sonic for rhymin.
vote: sonic

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Voted For: SONIC

this was a hot battle...you started out strong, but then kinda faded near the end...and that almost hurt you...a couple lines you had in there was choppy nad u shouldve left out
"Oh, did u tell them U'r addicted to "Crack".. Ass Crack That Is.." that wasnt handlin...i think u got this battle because of stronger wordplay, and better punches...nice flow

calamity, you had a great flow too...nice jobs...no hate, just in too many areas you fell off, and when u go against someone like SONIC, you need to stay on point that whole flow, it gotta be perfect, your rhyming was better, not too predictable, i like that, but the last couple lines made no since at all...elevate in that area, u should try to have a perfect flow whoever you go against

overall: this was neck n neck...nice flow...ya both was slippn in some areas but picked it bac up, unfortuantly, calamity was too late

nice flow people

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sonic had a good opener and close. sonic had pesonals metas both and the punches go to sonic both had good structure and both had good vocab but in the end sonic wins.

vote: sonic

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^^^ ..................................... herb

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Now you're knocking every vote I get too? what's wrong with ya'll and that I think that i'm better than others attitude.. "I'm higher because I battle in elevated.. honestly, people in elevated suck too, there isn't too much talent or knowledge on this site, that is discriminitory.. it's cool though, i ain't even gonna preech..

personals sonic
metas they both had metas
openner sonic had the betta opener
closing sonic had a betta closing
structure they both had good structure
vocab they both have vocab
punches sonic had betta punches so sonic wins in the end

vote sonic

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