ummm ok........UPPIN.......

Okay......
BREAKDOWN
Opener - shadows....he had a better personal in it...
Flow - shadows....his lines werent stretched...
Punches - tie...both didnt have that many great punches...
Personals - tie...both only had 1...
Multi's - shadows...obvious that he had multis and black didnt...
Closer - shadows...hit way harder than black's

Vote shadow...he had the better overall verse....black jus elevate on ur rhymes......u need more direct punches....seemed like u were jus rhymin but not throwin ne hard punches....so keep elevatin...

return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120502

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itte dis was a tight ass battle but im going wit shadow betta punch lines betta struc an betta flow black theid was no compo shyte but he needs to elevate more so my vote will goto shadow when i get enough post

Alright.. thanks for the votes... upping this slept on shit

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Yo vote on mine, I'll come back and vote on this one. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120460

This was a close battle both of yall came hard with solid lines and punches.

Punches-Black Thief's hit harder, but Shadows Edge had come clever ones they just needed to be better worded.
Creativity- Shadows edge (ya had creativity but it just needs to flow more)
Origional-Shadow's edge (punches seemed new)
Mulits- Black Thief
Flow-Black Thief (read through it easier, cause better use of mulit's)
Opener- Black Thief (wasn't feel'n the whole minimum wage thing)
Closer- Black Thief (Liked the coral reef but the two punches before that wasn't hurt'n Black Thief)

All in all Black Thief takes this one.

Aight thanks for the feedback.... other than that he had no multis at all, that was a good vote. uppin ^

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ay0o0o theif mang wuz really good spit was blazin hot ma nikuh had that shit perfect shadow shit was razy too mang but ima have togive it to theif holla cah boy -1-

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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Disqualified ^^ .. sick of this herb votes shit....

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allight im gonia giveit to ya straight
shadow took this by a little bit
why you ask well ill tell you

structure-shadow
easy read-black (blue wasn't easy to read that well)
flow-shadow
tight ness-shadow

sorry guess my vote goes to shadow
sorry for you black

thief-

Im bout to kill this cat in this fuckin battle
have u on tha "edge" of fuckin bein scared of ya own "shadow"(shadows-edge)

^^Personal and creative good punch 8/10


Edge-

Occupation: bill collector... like he bum his friends bills
Only thing this cat thieved is his sister's birth control pills

^^made me laugh personal 9/10

v/Edge

he edged his verse with betta personals.


Return fav

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This battle was hot.. man i wish i could vote.....

yea man that battle was tight i wish i could vote.

ok check it

black opener was pretty tight nice wordplay and good personal closer was garbage wasnt nothin there set up line was nothin and punch was nothin had good punchs and personlas threw out the verse though overall good verse should try workin on wordplay,evenin out all your lines and multies but still a nice verse
best lines
Im bout to kill this cat in this fuckin battle
have u on tha "edge" of fuckin bein scared of ya own "shadow"(shadows-edge)

shadow opener was kinda weak to me set up line was there but the punch didnt connect closer was tight liked that had good mulites personals and a good punch nice shit and some good punchs and wordplay threw the verse overall good verse liked some of that shit just work on bein consistent and more personals
best lines
Cat got two quarters to his name and think he 50 Cent
Quit chasing fame... spit one bar n your talent spent
and the closer was ill

vote shadows edge not by much good battle

hit this up

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121104

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