uppin

upping again

sonic took this with better meta's n punches came harder overall,but i still think they both could've came more original...some nice personals from sonic n better structure..so overall i was felling that verse more...
return the vote:
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I don't even care how many times he opens this, you're gonna lose anyway, that's why you never up it, cozx you know that you're gonna lose..

i have to say that pague you got this one
your structure and your flow was excellent
your punshlines were better you black plague you get my vote holla at your girl
you cant just wake up int he morning and feel that you can spit. you have to master the art of writting and that is where alot of niggas fall short at. but black plague i can say that you have mastered that art and i look forward to a battles between us soon.

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That is the most Dick Riding vote that iv'e ever read.. anyway, uppin

well i guess that i should go into more detail about my vote Datruth your lines were stretched and some of your lines were played out like that "bazooka" line.
Black plague i also feel that you won because you had more consistent punches, and like i said before your flow was better. that bill clinton line you used is what won you that battle it was nice and personal so again i say you get my vote

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plz return the favor....! check the battle in the sig..
uhmm best lines throughout..:
You tell me to set up a battle and then no show? I have no Respect Fo Ya/
i'll murder u n then throw yo jacket over the pool of blood fo my girl to Step Ova/
shit, you couldn't even be ahead of me if you you Teleported/
your mouth is filth, everything that comes out you is "dead" like Abortions/
^ nice way to open battle, nice punched and wordplay.. even good vocab..

best lines from Black Plague were:
But Dope lines from him are missin, like honesty from bill clinton
If you really are the truth could u tell me why you ain't winnin?
Kid you got no struc, ya lines are fucked up and badly scattered
My flow is like the windows on 50's H2, it simply can't be shattered
^ the lines where u say his lines are fucked up and badly scattered was a really good punch... but uhmm the ending Black Plague needed a lot of work, u must have a good opener and a good closer... but overall, this seemed really one-sided and datruth pretty much took this over.. better vocab aight structure nice punches better opener and better closer, so datruth u got this..
PLZ RETURN THE FAVOR~!

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Yo sonic had better WOrdplay and structure in his. He had more mettas too. I was feelin his drop more cuz his flow was better. Plauge had dat good opener though. Both dropz was aiight.Both closers were weak as hell.Both came hard but sonics shit jus hit harda.V/ Sonic