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09-01-04, 10:57 PM
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IP:
thanks a lot for the feedback...but I am confused as how the subject matter is not consistent...the subject is rooted into a story of mine...and every line has something to do with how i feel about the story...emotionally or physically..or it is explaining the story.....I'm not arguing with you....I am just wondering what stuck out to you as "Non consistent"
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We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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09-02-04, 10:50 AM
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...The Four Horsemen...
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IP:
Shits tite, i wouldnt nominate it as best though but i was feelign ya shitit was deep, ya was ok...
How long did it take you to write this and be honest now.... |
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09-02-04, 11:52 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
thats was deep shit, it was tight, keep it up~
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09-03-04, 08:25 PM
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IP:
uppin
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Seek & Destroy
We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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09-03-04, 10:24 PM
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Flyweight
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IP:
Deep drop...nice idea...good flow. I give that like a 8.5/10. That's like one of the best drops i've seen since i've been on da board. Keep it up
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09-04-04, 09:23 PM
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IP:
uppin
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Seek & Destroy
We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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09-04-04, 10:02 PM
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$Thug Life$
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IP:
nice drop man keep droppin aight i likie to see it...
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Hot Songz
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09-05-04, 07:40 PM
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IP:
uppin....
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Seek & Destroy
We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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09-05-04, 07:50 PM
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IP:
nice drop
i could see wat u meant nice overalll how long it took to make it also peep my open mic
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Guess who?... ...Paramik Fuckin'...
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09-05-04, 11:42 PM
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Blow Me
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IP:
pretty dope... good rhyme scheme... keep up the good work.. and ps. join my crew... just playing pc..
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09-06-04, 04:51 AM
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IP:
paramik....took me about 35 minutes..i woke up one time at 530 in the morning..and started writin
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Seek & Destroy
We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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09-07-04, 09:50 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP:
upping since i feel this is geting left out
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Guess who?... ...Paramik Fuckin'...
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09-08-04, 11:55 PM
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Light Weight
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IP:
that shit was hot, give u a 10/10. Love is complicated ain't really much u can do about except don't love at all or go with it. My fave line was
"Says she cares about" me, but she thinks labels are stupid.. Feelin hurt I make a hitlist sayin "first dude is cupid".. good stuff |
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09-10-04, 03:12 AM
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IP:
uppin
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Seek & Destroy
We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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09-11-04, 06:32 PM
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IP:
uppin for you sons of bitches
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Seek & Destroy
We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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