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View Poll Results: Geuce vs. sHoTTaBoY
Geuce 5 83.33%
sHoTTaBoY 1 16.67%
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Old 09-11-04, 09:27 PM   #1
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I lyrically bombard this wack mc with terminology from gods
Rob this cat from this win and rip his chances to defeat odds
5/10
My rhymes loft, and throw clips wit tongue twisting aerial deploys
Take my belt off, and let him get whipped let them kids in BabyBoy (Damn)
3.5/10 ~Bad Key~
Ironicly spit words that sent text battles up in flames
Tattoo his thoughts wit terms, so your mind will never forget my name
4/10
Nose bleed by venom lines like a lyrical handstand
I fill my bars to his lungs, making lyrical hand fans
3/10
Then again, I don’t need to spit hard to take this nigga’s soul
Cause I’m seeing through him, since my words left more than just a bullet hole
4/10

This drop wasent that great ive seen better from u
ya punches were kinda there i got the idea u was
trying to get across.. but were played and simple
use some complesity ya struc is there good there

Umm overall gave ya drop a 4/10

Mo'Fucka This Is The Battle TOURNAMENT..
I Aint Wanna Get Personal But I'ma Stick Yuh Head On My Wall As An ORNAMENT...
3/10
My First Oppenent Is G-DEUCE.....
I'ma Put Hollow Tips In Ya Tissue To DIFFUSE..
This Is Verbal ABUSE....
...I'm So TIGHT The Rhymes Got U Trapped In A NOOSE...!!!
4/10
My Seeds 11 An Yours Is Seven......
U My Nigguh n I Hate To Do This But They Do Say 'ALL DOGS GO TO HEAVEN'..!!!
2/10
Man, I'm More Deadly Than A Great White Clutchin A BAZOOKA..
So If The JabaJaws Dont Get Ya U Know I'ma Shoot-ya..
4/10
Bitch, U Wouldnt Be Hot Even If U Duplicate-Me..
..I'm Ya 'ROLE MODEL' n I Advise You To ''Tie Ya Penis Up n Jump From A TREE''..!
..People Sayin ''O Now He Bite Slim Shady''...
..Yea But I Made His Line Hot n This Battles Mine n Ya'll Want An ''ENCORE'' Like I'm JayZ..!
I Got An Uzi To Make Deuce Feel Woozy n His Mommas In Church Screamin ''O WHAT HAPPEND TO MY POOR BABY?!?!''..!!
7/10

Punches were ok ya structure wasent that good and ya complexity was ok i guess ya vocab was emmm more mediocore and ya open and close was ok

overall drop 5/10
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Old 09-12-04, 09:40 AM   #2
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Old 09-12-04, 12:04 PM   #3
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shotta- weak punches cuz u was e-gangsta 'n shit which is terrible and the punches you had that werent e-gangsta, were just whack. you worked on tryin to use wordplay but it was all simple as shit......5/10

G euce- not the shit but enough to win. vocab was punches was ehh, but more overall quality then his so you gunna take the win here.....6/10

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Old 09-13-04, 04:48 AM   #4
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i thought you two were crew ne wayz i like shottaboi's better... much more ounchines that were harder...
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Old 09-13-04, 10:35 AM   #5
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Old 09-13-04, 11:39 AM   #6
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Geuce got this easy...i looked at this battle and thought who came wit the punches...and my answer was G...personals i looked not all there but G got my vote on them aswell...then the structure and flow...flow was tied both readble but G's Struc was better nicely layed out but a bit uneven...prolly would've worked if he centred his verse...Best lines...

G : Deuce
I lyrically bombard this wack mc with terminology from gods
Rob this cat from this win and rip his chances to defeat odds
/\ Decent opener

Ironicly spit words that sent text battles up in flames
Tattoo his thoughts wit terms, so your mind will never forget my name
/\ nice wordplay

sHoTTaBoY
My Seeds 11 An Yours Is Seven......
U My Nigguh n I Hate To Do This But They Do Say 'ALL DOGS GO TO HEAVEN'..!!!
/\ not feelin it particually but ur best line prolly

sHoTTaBoY i think u still need work on leadin up to punches it's still kinda ima do this and ima do that type layout...it don't work at this level...an aight battle but 1 sided in my opinion...

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