Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Ight this is how I see it......

KPD:
I'll put the "mac" to ya "dynasty" like Tracy to the Rockets
Jimmy reps the D 'cuz he wants what's in between my pocketz...
8/10 - Nice intro, usage of metas and similes

I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper
You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper...
7/10 - Could have been better, wording was off

This jerk is rude but I'ma merk this dude
Troop puts in plenty of work on the corner - will work for food...
7/10 - Very weak punch, wording was off

Go back to "Council"-ing, sayin' you'll KO me in 8 lines
I just killed you, oh fuck, I just commited a hate crime...
9/10 - Good comeback from last line, nice closer
total: 31

Trooper:
Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions
You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions
8/10 - Solid intro and opener

You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines
Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's
7/10 - Average punchline, not hard hitting

Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech
7/10 - Average again because of lack of hard punchline

Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's"
u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals
8/10 Very solid and great closer
Total:30

Conclusion:
Both were ok drops, KPD had inconsistancy in his delieverance and Trooper's sentences set up for a great punchline, but lacked the deliver. My vote goes to KPD.

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Voted For: Trooper

Aiight, this battle was pretty easy to judge.. Troop got it because although dizzle came with some alright punchlines, it didnt follow through.. Whereas troop came with good shit from the start and it carried through to the closer.

Dizzle, best advice I can give you, is to make your disses more consistant..

vote- Trooper

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Voted For: Trooper

Cool battle...both came alright...Trooper had sum alright meta's...just could be worded better...but good...P-Dizzle had sum ok shit to...this was a pretty even matched battle...Trooper was more consistent in this with his punches...P dizzles last two bars gave Trooper the win...just didnt come hard enough...work on wordplay you guys...keep elevatign cuz ur getting better...good battle!

Hit this up please...its slept on...
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Thanks...

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Crhyme Sindicate

nice drop P way to rep the crew

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My Lines Are ILL yo

Still uppin' for more votes, let's finish this one folks...

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hm Bitch Made

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just check'n the count

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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

close battle to me

Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions
You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions
decent opener first line was decent wording messed it up the punch was ok easy wordplay

You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines
Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's
lol.. ight punch and set up good flow
Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech
umm this was filler i hope weak attemtp at a punch had wordplay but i dont think the punch connected very well brah flow was coo again
Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's"
u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals
lol.. not a bad closer good similie in first line punch was decent basically sayin it wont never happen so not very original

I'll put the "mac" to ya "dynasty" like Tracy to the Rockets
Jimmy reps the D 'cuz he wants what's in between my pocketz...
first line was ok the punch was nice made me laugh at that shit
I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper
You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper...
um weak bars honestly tried at his name but the punch didnt connect to me decent wordplay though
This jerk is rude but I'ma merk this dude
Troop puts in plenty of work on the corner - will work for food...
lol..nice flow above average punch wasnt that good though
Go back to "Council"-ing, sayin' you'll KO me in 8 lines
I just killed you, oh fuck, I just commited a hate crime...
fist line was nice but the punch fucked it up could have killed him with that set up but messed it up with that punch

overall close battle but p dizzle came with more attempts at personals some connected some was way off but still had an overall better verse to me trooped ya shit was coo wit all the similies no real personals but in the closer everything else u just stuck his name in it neither really had real strong punchs to mebut close battle here ya'll both about on the same level

nice battle kids

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Ayo still uppin' this shit, let's get some more votes here...

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Voted For: Trooper

yo dis goes to troopa man but Kid u had some good lines son,
I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper
You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper that was a pretty good one but u need more peronals and mayb a few more harder punches
Troopa dawg u gave it to him specially wit this lineYou will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines
Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's
that was funny as hell good battle yall but from harder punches and betta wordplay this goes to troopa

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Voted For: Trooper

breakdown for sizzle

I'll put the "mac" to ya "dynasty" like Tracy to the Rockets
Jimmy reps the D 'cuz he wants what's in between my pocketz...

Opener was blah, punch was fair nothing special4/10

I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper
You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper...

Iraqi lines are really played3/10


This jerk is rude but I'ma merk this dude
Troop puts in plenty of work on the corner - will work for food...

This was jus wack 2/10

Go back to "Council"-ing, sayin' you'll KO me in 8 lines
I just killed you, oh fuck, I just commited a hate crime...

Clever closer, ya best line but not very hard 5/10
Overall:14/40

Trooper


Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions
You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions

Creative opener, wording wasn't right tho..7/10

You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines
Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's

Opener was played, punch was played 3/10

Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech

Creative again....6/10

Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's"
u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals

Kinda blah but decent...5/10
Overall:21/40

Not a close battle both came weak but trooper was better of the two

Vote: troop

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Ayo, for some reason this battle was re-opened, so I'm uppin'...

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Uppin' again, should be the last time I have to...

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Ayo, uppin' once again, damn people quit sleepin' on this...

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Uppppppin'.....

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