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Ill-Grammatix 3 37.50%
DV8 5 62.50%
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Old 09-22-04, 10:51 AM   #31
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aight we need more votes leave a link n ill return the favour/don't expect ill-g to,cause hes on vacation...com'on need more votes..............
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Old 09-27-04, 03:10 PM   #32
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need feedback...holla...
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Old 09-27-04, 04:05 PM   #33
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hot shit kid, keep it up, battle was to hard/close to vote on
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Old 10-03-04, 03:11 AM   #34
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Originally Posted by DV8
hmmm,i don't see how you be votin on humour as the determining factor,?
a verse doesnt have to be humourous to be hard hitting...!!,not a very well explained vote,n ill-g im not jus sayin that cause he did'nt vote 4 me...lol...


lol...i guess..but all of your disses were aimed at Manip instead of me..lol....real good spit though.... still too close to call... even if I voted I'd have a hard time deciding who won....lol
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Old 10-09-04, 04:44 AM   #35
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meh can't vote jus checkin something...............
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 10-12-04, 01:09 AM   #36
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Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

I appreciate the chance to alleviate DV8
Ya intermedi-ate skills ain't good enough for drops I.G. create
NO KINDA WEAK OK THOUGH
Mock Battle Verses?... you pre-write! you thought we wouldn't remember?
Ya entered R.V. a loser still you think you a contender
GOOD DISS I MADE THE PRE WRITE THREAD LOL FUCK YOU ILL LOL GOOD PERSONAL
"Pretend-to-be-sick with words" but I'm the only "Ill-Grammatix"
This faggot's a clone-a baggage of bones with skills extracted
DOPE SHIT GOOD ASS PUNCH
Ya "Mind Kollidez" with mine-ya mental's gettin scrambled
Can't think straight... like homos with pictures of Tevin Campbell (lmao)
OK HOMO JOKES ARE PLAYED
Keep ramblin' on and on about the garbage kats you blow through
They all noobs... ya supposed to win... but this post here exposed you
GOOD ASS PUNCH AGAIN
I coast through ya flow with ease... this text-tease (textee's)
Gettin' "clowned" and knocked down like "Ron" boxin' in "Mickey D's" (lol)
OK
Nigga please... the only way you seeing me is in member mugshots
It must be mosquito season cuz all ya punches feel like love knocks
LOL GOOD PUNCH AGAIN
My hammerin blows leave foes stammerin... doze? I'll finish you
"Pop-eyes" using lethal lines with the same effect that spinach do (ctfu)
DOPE FUCKING PUNCH HERE NICE WORDPLAY
Miniscule kat... Diminish ya raps... ya styles beneath me
Whenever you want another "L" you know where you can reach me!
ENDER NICE GOOD CLOSER
THIS WAS DOPE NICE FLOW GOOD ASS VOCAB NICE MULTIS GREAT PUNCHES AND DISSES 8.5/10

Ya lines waste space n shit, ya Konsept's laced wit distaste, I displace n erase your hits,
Your styles basic, ya only spit ill with grammar when lick’n disease infested novelists clits,
WACK NO REAL PUNCH GOD FLOW AND MULTIS HELPED
herb your trash, you write words i laugh, you phat? .not even when writing on obese hips,
fuck your scripts, you hot? you wouldnt even spit fire if i was lighting grease on ya lips,
LOL FIRE SPIT LINES ARE PLAYED BUT GOOD SHIT FUCK THAT I LIKED IT NICE PUNCH
you wanna go toe 2 toe? you betta be pissin cyphillis in butt ta match my sick ass flow,
ya record shows you lack blows,ya most accomplished wins from a chick dat no-showed,
LOL GOOD DISS SICK LINES ARE ALSO PLAYED THOUGH DAMMIT
i must adress your a mess,you honestly give new meaning to the word to meaning-less,
im not sure whats more pathetic.!..,your text of ya crew being led by a fuckin princess,
LMAO GOOD ASS FUCKING PERSONAL HAHA ILL OWNED!!!
ya drops are neglected, you ILL? .......nah ya shits not even close to being infected,
ya got a false sense of being respected, here ill fix ya verse *DELETE*..!!now its perfected,
OK WACK HERE AND ANOTHER SICK LINE OMG NO !!
ILL's GRAMMA punches like TIX, so my hits'll leave him in knots like little kids shoe laces,
get a grip and take ya trip, cause you don't pack a punch like hawaiin drinks in suit cases,
GOOD PUNCH BASIC BUT DOPE
your gay n strictly ass, youra dick dat wack n you aint in the army to be physical attacked,
its obvious your a fag, dats a skill you grasp, but you shoud really try stayin off that crack,
WACK PUNCH AGAIN
its fuckin obvious dude , but i know U don't have a clue, the only kastrophy in U're crew is U,
U're pussy, in a crew full of fems, that explains why you have momma in your name 2,
WACK AS WELL
who you mad at, your jus a army brat that try's ta pass bad spits as effective static,
its tragic, cause you could'nt even drib-ill (dribble) lethal spits if your name was magic,
GOOD ASS ENDER HER NICE WORDPLAY
FLOW WAS OFF IN SOME PLACES HERE VOCAB WAS GOOD NICE MULTIS ALSO PUNCHES LACKED IN CERTAIN PLACES AND THAT MADE YOU LOSE HERE CUZ YOU HAD SOME REALLY PLAYED CONCEPTS WHILE ILL WAS REAL ORIGINAL AND HIT HARDER.7/10
VOTE-ILL GRAMATICS WITH STRONGER PUNCHES THROUGHOUT HIS VERSE AND A BETTER FLOW

I BEST GET HONEST VOTES BACK THIS IS A LONG ASS FUCKING TYPING

Vote Reinstated.. ILL GRAMATICS did not post in crew forum until 10/12 at around 11am.
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Old 10-12-04, 02:41 AM   #37
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Scenario
hot shit kid, keep it up, battle was to hard/close to vote on

no doubt... thx for the feed back... i'll hit ya links up w/honest votes when i get a chance..one
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Old 10-12-04, 08:25 PM   #38
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let's finish this out y'all.... will return favor of honest votes
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Old 10-13-04, 09:03 AM   #39
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mo votes please........................................
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Old 10-14-04, 03:59 PM   #40
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can we get some closure to this shyt already? we just want honest votes...explained... so that we can close this out... it's a good battle... so rock the vote!
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Old 10-17-04, 03:47 AM   #41
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once again i call upon the public to drop an honest vote and elect a winner... for the people, by the people...one
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Old 10-17-04, 07:59 AM   #42
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I was in Katastrophe Koncepts when this battle started and me and Empire weren't in the same crew... why'd that vote get deleted?!!!
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Old 10-17-04, 03:39 PM   #43
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i want free money so i'm leaving feedback in people battles of my crew good luck 1
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Old 10-18-04, 02:35 AM   #44
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Voted For: DV8


Dv8
u had nice flawless structure i mean it was a lil long but datz aight
u can chop dat down u had nice punches and good setup
ya personals were portrayed really well and ya meta's were aight
u had some nice wordplay which stands out 2 me
Punches,Meta's and Personals and wordplay are the keyz 2 winning
and u checked them all

Ill
u came with an ok drop here u could of elevated it a lil
and provided a better structure cuz u lost points jus because
it was sloppy and kinda difficult 2 follow u should focus on a smaller font u can fit in alot more instead of havein the letters all big and stretched
ya punches were there but ya set up wasent and that also lost u points
nice personals

was kinda a close battle but Dv8 takes this one
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Old 10-18-04, 04:59 AM   #45
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Quote:
Originally Posted by *Troop*
Voted For: DV8
Ill
u came with an ok drop here u could of elevated it a lil
and provided a better structure cuz u lost points jus because
it was sloppy and kinda difficult 2 follow u should focus on a smaller font u can fit in alot more instead of havein the letters all big and stretched
ya punches were there but ya set up wasent and that also lost u points
nice personals

was kinda a close battle but Dv8 takes this one
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Thanks for the feedback... even though ya hate my crew,lol... it's all tied up 3-3... it can still go either way... *nods his head approvingly"... "this is how battles are supposed to go down... neck and neck... respect,DV8!"
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