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5 | 62.50% |
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3 | 37.50% |
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10-05-04, 04:22 PM
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maybe so.....once oyu elevate and im suffering from sever writers block........yes im that much btter
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10-06-04, 01:15 PM
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IP:
upppiin for votes.............c'mon were they at./
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10-07-04, 07:34 AM
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Really? I don't think you are,,.. I think someone needs to remove their head
from there own ass................... Also your verse was pre~witten so that shits debatable nuff said!!! Up~ing for more dick riders... |
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10-12-04, 08:21 AM
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Black Poet
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LMAO Fucking uping this battle,,.. I want this shit closed.
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10-13-04, 08:59 AM
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Black Poet
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Sup,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,................. ...................Ing,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.............. ....
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10-13-04, 08:47 PM
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Voted For: d.j em sce
This was a really close topical battle and for one reason... both verses were well written..... d.j em sce your verse had so much depth and raw emotion.. your words alone captured your thoughts of love and it flowed smoothly... i think the structure could have been better but your vocabulary was great... imagery was also used just a little too much but overall you worked this topic to your ability... critic as soon as i started to read your first stanza i thought to myself he won this battle... everything flowed perfectly in that stanza and there was decent depth and good imagery.. BUT.. your verse lost its touch as it went on... it was kinda like you put less effort into it and just wrote anything basically.. i like how you put your verse into a story but i dont like how you did it like everyone else would have the plot is u played concept unlike dj's... your imagery got better but everything else dragged on and i kinda got bored with your verse... it didnt grab my attention much it was still a good verse but dj's emotion and depth got my vote ~!1!~
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10-14-04, 08:43 AM
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Thanks for the feedback flow,.. I want a rematch,,...
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10-15-04, 12:26 AM
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Lyrical Prosperity
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This was feedback posted for CriTiC
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nice, real deep!`
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10-17-04, 12:46 AM
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This was feedback posted for d.j em sce
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this was a very good topical!!
damn..dj emcee had a very good topical..one of the best i've seen..really! I could really feel the emotion on it wen i read it... and how u showed how u felt about the person u love..n didn't care about sex...that shows true love... Critic: yours was pretty good also.. but i just didn't feel ur emotion as much as dj's...you shoulda used more emotion... but its alrite..this was a close battle.. vote: dj
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10-17-04, 12:54 AM
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Voted For: CriTiC
ok crtic better imagery and detain as well as structure and flow dj better vocab and also good but you failed to bring a good picture as critic did he had a better storyline and i could see his shit come about better .no hate just a honest vote critic for showing the topic better with imagery
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10-17-04, 02:07 AM
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howdy
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This was feedback posted for CriTiC
IP:
checking votes for the EFL voting game...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155573
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10-18-04, 08:28 AM
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Black Poet
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IP:
Uping for votes please,,...
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10-19-04, 04:38 PM
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IP:
Up~ing for close !!!
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10-25-04, 09:47 PM
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Ask About Me
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IP:
uppin for voters.............................bitches,....... ....
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11-01-04, 06:00 AM
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Voted For: CriTiC
I think that CriTiC got this battle because i feel that CriTiC came stronger in the following categories...Topic i felt CriTiC got it it was effective and on point d.j em sce u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion rhyming i felt went to CriTiC good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to CriTiC and flow and structure i'll give to CriTiC. V/CriTiC There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly
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