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CriTiC 5 100.00%
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Old 12-13-04, 05:35 AM   #1
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leave you rest'n pz's
 
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This was feedback posted for SUPERVILLAIN

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checkin polls......................................
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 12-16-04, 10:34 AM   #2
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^^^up...up......uppin' away!!!

the super duper...c.s.
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Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher.
I don't drive an Eclipse, they're chickmobiles.




QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE




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R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.
 
Old 12-18-04, 12:04 PM   #3
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^^^up...up......uppin' away!!!

the super duper...c.s.
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Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher.
I don't drive an Eclipse, they're chickmobiles.




QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE




"I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown




R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.
 
Old 12-19-04, 01:01 AM   #4
Parallel
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Voted For: CriTiC

SuperVilain:
i had no clue you write all these lines that dont make sense...but no hate but you need elevation work on the wordplay try using a better flow to in your verse because you kinda fucked uo on the flow a bit...the stucture was iight kinda fell a little bit towards the middle...but stucture was good..overal...7.2/10

Critic:
not the best ive seen from you but it was pretty dope...nice use of multis and vocabulary...nice wordplay in your lines very well done stucture with a super good flow with it to...nice verse is all i can say you take this with ease...

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return the favour here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=159763
hopefully you understand my punches cuz half the people dont..
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Old 12-20-04, 08:10 AM   #5
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Thanks for the votes people uping this for close.

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Old 01-07-05, 08:56 AM   #6
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Uping,,,...............................

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Old 02-03-05, 08:27 AM   #7
Critic
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Uping this pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee,.................... .....................
 
Old 02-08-05, 08:12 AM   #8
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Uping for votes !!!

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Old 03-03-05, 07:53 AM   #9
Critic
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Uping for votes please!!! Lop top battery coming this week!!!

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Old 03-07-05, 08:52 AM   #10
Critic
Black Poet
 
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Bumping for close come on people this has been open since november last year!!
 
Old 03-08-05, 06:00 PM   #11
Affinity
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Voted For: CriTiC

Supervillian:
your stucture was alright but not as great as expected your imagery was alright coulda been ebtter vocab was pretty damn weak the emotion was ight but coulda been way better the flow was ight coulda been better but really work on creativty and write to amuse others not just to be ya know, pz

Critic:
well you overal had better everythign but i was really feeling your nice vocab great imagery the stucture was super great the emotion was so good and the flow was flawless ahha, if there is ever a topical touney and theres partners or somin i want you to be mine. but keep doin ya thing and get my pm its parallel pz

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Old 03-08-05, 10:37 PM   #12
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nice drops on both sides.

critic. i really felt your structure and word play.. you had really good vocab and eveything went smooth. niiiiice job on this one.. .. i liked yours so much because it was honest and it was real.. nice vocab. metas. and rhyme scheme

supervillain.. also a very nice drop .. only thing was ur lines were to stretched which affected the overalll flow.. critic had a really good flow.. your structure was off key.. otherwise a very nice drop .. it just didnt have all the honesty that critics did

nice drop on both parts

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Old 03-10-05, 08:21 AM   #13
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SV you yonked my victory, haha thats not a dick ride vote man
but it's kool up~ing

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Old 03-10-05, 10:02 AM   #14
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^^^this ones for you crit.....lol.....UPPIN'!!!^^^


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Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher.
I don't drive an Eclipse, they're chickmobiles.




QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE




"I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown




R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.
 
Old 03-11-05, 08:12 AM   #15
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ha ha shit I didn't relize it was the same person voting good call
sorry hungover yesterday,...

Uping !!!
 
 


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