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Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-

an okay battle...
dipsett-your lines seemed kinda unfinished(like u didnt have enough sylables in ur bars)...but ur punches were aight, they were just boring, and didnt hit me hard enough to wanna give u my vote...u had good wordplay, and nice creative in ur verse also...big ups to that, but i think u should work on being more consistent...u kinda fell off ur topic near tha end, and started writing some dumb shit(work on that)...but overall a nice verse

angel-u had a coo verse also, but u did tha opposite of dipset, yo lines were stretched(u should work on that), but i liked how u changed ur style up from tha otha battle i voted on(big ups on that), in this verse, u had some nice wordplay, and punches that u dropped. i wasnt feeling em all, but i liked enough of em to give u tha vote...but i think u should work on consistentcy also, cause u started off wack, but u did manage to pick it up afterwards, but if dipset came hard tha whole battle, that wouldve hurt u...but good shit overall

overall-i think yall should work on ur structure, and consistentcy...but a close battle..

plz return tha vote on my battle in sig ya'll...if ya'll dont, i wont vote on none of ur battles again...


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Cmon Yall Lets get some more votez in this peace

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i aint got enough posts 2 vote on dis battle .............BUT, soon as i do get 200 imma hit dis 1 up n vote on it i got like 30 some posts 2 do b4 i can tho

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Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-



"King Shit Head" Is not built, But hes prepared to get all his organs Spilt,
His one packs reduced to saddle bag, He runs around with it full of guilt,

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Prayin to God Aint gonna Help This Angel
Ill shove a flag Up ya Ass so you Can See The star Spangle

angel start was way better...

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I got Punches That hit harder than Holyfields hit To the Gut
U Hang on me Like I Got Bushwick Bill Hangin On my Nuts
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Your date is ready, He Is waiting at your door with a handful of red flowers.
You mouth will clench at the end of this line, Cause to me your flow is sour

dip-set ending was better......

flow: angel
punch:angel:
opening: angel
ending: dip-set
creativeness: angel

vote: angel

Voted For: King~~Dipset

Gotta go with my man Dipset on this one...Felt his punches hit harder and were much more creative and thought thru than godz angel...to tell you the truth, godz angel's shit was pretty wack...his punches hit about as hard as my grama does...lmao...King Dips also wins in the flow and multies category...didnt really see too many personals from either side...So, my vote goes to King~~Dipset...1

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Voted For: King~~Dipset

Ok... no offense to ya'll but a wack battle all around... Godz Angelz you started out okay, but in ya second line you basically dissed yaself... and don't play the age shit, cuz you only 12 so it don't work.. it just sounds wack as fuck. The thing about the crown and the puberty shit just didn't make sense to me, and was wack... punches didn't come together, so try to work on ya punches... struc was on target, flow was decent... King you came pretty bad too, but enough to beat him... first line was halfway decent, a attempt at a punch..2nd line made no sense, and was set up horribly... 3rd line was wack too, and was just an attempted statement/punch, but it missed...5th line was decent, Prolly one of ya best lines.... Closer was your best line.. not great but decent... and lose the numbers after ya lines...

OVerall this goes to King Dipset... better attempted punches, and a better set up verse... Godz loses because he tried to many age disses, and his closer was one of the wackest i've ever heard... Not good verses from either, but to me King gets this..

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Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-

watta wack verse frm gods angel kid ,,,, dnt try rappin aiight ur wack ur verse wuz wack and overall a 6/10 man cmon u gotta have punches not shit likeTake all your clocks and set them back one hur, Dont you skip your shower,
Your date is ready, He Is waiting at your door with a handful of red flowers.
You mouth will clench at the end of this line, Cause to me your flow is sour.
^^^ the 1st line had no punch wtf ........................
now as for my dawg king homie you owned his ass lol man u were bit off the flow but had good punches Prayin to God Aint gonna Help This Angel
Ill shove a flag Up ya Ass so you Can See The star Spangle
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ lol hahaha good shit dawg keep it up i rest my case

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Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-

I think god gets this one becuase his flow and his structure was better in this one his rhyming made more sense he had harder punches he had more personals I think. His opener to his closure was better, his multis where ok and his vocab was I think was better so this vote goes to godz.

hit up on my links please peace.

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