Voted For: GangsStarShit

Whoever said you were dope...musta been kiddin,
Coz u only cause drafts from exhailin when spittin,
^^^nice opner.... flowed well
You paid the price although it's free-hatin-me,
And u've been spittin wack...since you lost CreatiVitie,
^^^^still flowing well.... an aight punch
Face it ya overrated and people jus dickride the shit you do,
Ya spits are lame shit i seen bacon spit better than you,
^^^^good meta
Dexterious?...u the ginger midget makin up shit all day,*
And if you think your dope?...i'd hate to sce em d.j,
^^^^hahaha lol... good hard htting personal
You take stuff too serious like it's a god damn mission,
And i'm afraid i can't help ya coz ya lost ya ambition,
^^^^an aight closer
Good verse here.... it flowed well al through out...

your infantile style cant compete to my dexterous verbal rhapsody's
spitten at a high velocity is da only way to past your loosing capacity
^^^^mmm.... an aight opener... bit of self glorify
you should have known im an mc who loves to kill people
you just got murdered….so theres neva gonna be a ill sequel
^^^^na..... weak...
kid you tryna rain but im changing the forecast like a weather man
im a veteran so next time stick to battling niggas dat you better than
......^^ you aint a vet... dont self glorify....
ur not even fully developed so how u gonna get da bigga picture
dis aint a kodak moment its ur death in sum lyrical scriptures
^^^no..... most likely a prew ritten punch....
damn im confused its like you wanted to loose at any cost
cuz even in the rules it stated that gangsstarshit already lost
^^^^na..... weak... no real wordplay anywhere
Pretty simple verse by you so my vote goes to
gangstershit

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Voted For: d.j em sce

lol dj one this... it was kinda close.. im just not feeling m-dogs style.. i wasnt feeling the overusage of vocab by create but he still took this with better punches.. flow was about even.. but structure goes to GSS... so this was a close one DJ just edged with his punches.. no hate.. just elevate..

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Voted For: GangsStarShit

open:GSS: "Whoever said you were dope...musta been kiddin,
Coz u only cause drafts from exhailin when spittin," -Good opener, hard punch, good use of metas. I think em sce was trying too hard to get good complicated vocab in there he forgot about making it actually good!

close:GSS: "You take stuff too serious like it's a god damn mission,
And i'm afraid i can't help ya coz ya lost ya ambition," -Pure genius!! Personal, hard-hitting punch line, metaphor.
-em sce's close was ok but im afraid doesnt even compare.

GangsStarShit's best line:
"Face it ya overrated and people jus dickride the shit you do,
Ya spits are lame shit i seen bacon spit better than you," -i dont think ive seen many verses as good as this in a battle and this line just topped it off I think.

Em sce's Best line:
"ur not even fully developed so how u gonna get da bigga picture
dis aint a kodak moment its ur death in sum lyrical scriptures" -This was quite good. But to be honest i dont think even this line came close to GSS's worst in this verse.

Overall: GSS wiped the floor with DJ em sce. Anyone who thinks otherwise is a liar!!!! This isnt opionion it is fact. GSS's use of metaphors, personals, punchlines and overall entertainment of the verse was far superior to most battle verses i have seen on this whole site.

-Keep it up.

DJ em sce: you are obviously good. Your vocab was good, you did have a good use of metas but mainly your pnches were weaker. Dont take this as hate, i am just saying wat i think

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