Voted For: J Gutta

gutta took this battle in my opinion. his structure and flow were alot better than the Sickness's. also his punches hit harder and were more creative, some ight attempts at personals. not a very good opener but ight closer. sickness needed to come wit more stuff to win but didnt
get at me
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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

O All Them D/r'z, I Reported To Strobe, Shit J-guttah Should Win This Battle No Contest. Wun.

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^^ you just like to fuckin cheat for ya fuck-buddy jgutta ... well whateva im just gon rip you in our battle ... peace bitch

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Voted For: J Gutta

im like a 'broken scale', here to say 'no wiegh'/ (way)
ya the 'mike tyson' of RV, 'bitin' rhymes to captures ya listeners 'ear'/


i have heard both of those lines before..... and like identical somewhere else.... maybe Rb.... but it sounds like biting to me.... u wouldve taken this battle for me, but i suspect biting goin on

J Gutta had an ok Verse..... his whole "sickness" thing that ran through the whole verse was good, and made a nice addition.... i ddnt like the "Pregnant" bar, it was kinda stupoid and too thuggish/fake personal for this battle..... but it was decent overalll

now The sickness had some nice punches, and a good personal to open it up...... but if those two bars i pasted is not biting, they are still very played concepts if i can remember someone else doin them, esp. the mike tyson biting one..... so u lose my vote for good punches, but bein played

Ohhh and i dropped an honest vote, so can u please return the favor to the link in my sig.... my battle with CALI..... idf really appreciate it....

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Voted For: Tha Sickness

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173761

^ Vote on it

Sickness:
so you think you can defeat my sickness 'Ayy'/
im like a 'broken scale', here to say 'no wiegh'/ (way)
ya the 'mike tyson' of RV, 'bitin' rhymes to captures ya listeners 'ear'/
this battles like 'glass' ill be the victor, that much is 'clear'/

vs.

intentionaly foul dis nigga if he look at me strange,
my eyes suck far vision, but ma scope got range//


v/The Sickness...for stronger punches...the broken scale was the best.

Can you guys hit up that battle plz, thank you.

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Voted For: Tha Sickness

damm i give dis 2 u fam ...ya verse was kind of hott even tho it was shorter than gutta's u had a couple creative punchlines..no personals or multis and ya structure was cool...gutta whuts good fam y u stay talkin about "black chuck tailors"??? lol damm dat aint 4 dis type of rappin...u had a solid verse nothin really stood out from ya shit

opener-sick
structure-a tie
punchlines-sick
creativity-sick
multis-nun
wordplay-nun
personals-gutta
finisher-gutta
enjoyed-sick.....like i said he came with da betta verse


return da favor ya'll

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^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: Tha Sickness

how does J gutta have three votes? prolly all dickriders... J you dont have any wordplay and you talk about what you do(killin and stuff like that) and you talk about his mom thats retarded and beyond played. sayin how (gutta) you are isn't battleing... its wordplay and punches.
godfather... you got this with alot of wordplay, but try directing more of your wordplay as punches instead of just sayin stuffya the 'mike tyson' of RV, 'bitin' rhymes to captures ya listeners 'ear'/
this battles like 'glass' ill be the victor, that much is 'clear'/
^^^this is dope wordplay, callin him a biter, see thats a punch as well.

ya 'vocal box', and ya 'mind' must be broken/
cuz when you 'think' about a rhyme, all i 'hear' is 'Choken'/
^^^decent, because it was worplay and a punch, but it was a made up punch, doesn't hit as hard.

so you think you can defeat my sickness 'Ayy'/
im like a 'broken scale', here to say 'no wiegh'/ (
^^real good wordplay agian, but this is the worst line maybe out of yours because its not a punch and not makin fun of the other guy.
decent drop, just try directing you punches more.
...check my sig later and it'll have a battle up

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