Voted For: Stanza

kk i just checked this battle and what tha fuck kinda of structure was that heat was doin stanza ok but wordplay was kinda weak but u got it cause way easier to read and flowed way better and heat dont say hate vote cause thats not tha case at all

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Voted For: Stanza

V/Stanza...he gets my vote cause he came wit good consistent punchs an personals....his structure was better an overall better the last line was hot.....heat....u need to elavate ur structure was off an some ur diss's were basic an played work on that....No Hate.....RETURN THE FAVOR
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overall=Stanza

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I laugh at ur lame attempts 2 try make me look stupid
cut open ya chest n bare ya heart like bein naked wit cupid

^^ WTF make no sense, bare ya heart like being naked with cupid haha WTF?

Yo moms call me up just to feel my bone..
She could sit her pussy on a beach so her crabs feel at home
^^ poor attemp at a flip line, shit aint even flow good

Your Sensin so Serious, But ur Text is Delirious
U stay On dicks like bitches who have sex on their periods
stay on dick like bitches with periods?? u tell me how do that make sense? wouldnt they stay away since they got there period???

Hurt Yo Left Eye wit Dis Lyrical Content Burnin House Mc Lik U
Yo Shit Was Neva Sick, Ppl Like Tim Mcgraw Might Bite U
^^ WTF? TIM MCGRAW??

* Yawn *

Dis verbal castration,will leave U jacked Like masturbation
only time U was off the meter is when U left the 'cab waiting
^^ POOR FLIP AT SHEEK LOUCH LINE * im off the meter like a taxi cab*

~Stanza~


^^ that was consistent???




You A Dick Ryder So Ya Fans-Suck, Chop Ya Arms Off And Toss-Ya-Hands-Up
You Straight Bitch How You Gonna Man-Up, With Flow Thats Older Then A 89 Nissan Stanza
hes name is stanza *personal* with slight bit of multis, flow good

Dude I Smash Wacks, And " Verbally Abuse The Beat" Cause I Can "Handle Tracks"
While You Stay "Soft Round The Heat" Like "Candle Wax"
heat is my name, he acts hard but get soft around me like burning candle wack get it?? diss

Now Handle That.. And So You "Know Your Number 2" I Put A "Pencil To Ya Head"
Cause This "Kid Unprepaired For Stiches" He's "RUNNIN OUT OF THE THREAD!!"
hes number 2/pencil, when u sitch up rip clothes u use thread/ easy to follow

Try All Youre Might, Youre LightWeight Your Not Gonna Thrive, Verses Get Toppled Wit Knives
And With All His Vulnerability To Punchez.. Who HASN'T HIT YA?.. Like Prostitute Wives
WOW that punc right there killed hes WHOLE FUCKING VERSE.... creative and all flow good and all..


good luck


With ya trashed raps it was obviously expected you'd be Clapped Back, Marinate ya Skull and Boil it! buryed under a soiled ditch..
cuz even at a 'far distance' you can smell that Cologne/Alone's Contents comes from De Toillete..
( eau de toillete )

a name brand colone: called eau de toillete/toilet

danm and this was weaka nd basic ya said??

this kid an actress who act sick, but u can look up my flow in a biofilm
who da fuck would of thought ya really ryde dick here like lesbo in a vibrator porn film...

^^ another punch i just tossed in there FUCK U STANZA

WTF is U Yalkin Bout Now?


Come on yall Lets end this

Uuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Voted For: Stanza

ok first off you both need to fix the structure...dont space between a bar.....its not good....heat..you had ups and downs in your verse...some of your punches were decent...some of them werent too good...you were quite inconsistent with your verse...stanza you had some pretty good concepts...and you were witty with yours...pretty consistent all the way through...so this battle goes to stanza for harder hitting punches...more witty punches...and for the lack of consistency by heat....no hate in this vote...good battle

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Voted For: Stanza

Stanza man you got some sick lines in this bitch. Haha, good job man. Heat didn't come at you bad either, but i think you shit was stronger. "Yo moms call me up just to feel my bone..
She could sit her pussy on a beach so her crabs feel at home" i love that line. I don't think i ever heard it before, or if i did i dont remember.

"Hurt Yo Left Eye wit Dis Lyrical Content Burnin House Mc Lik U
Yo Shit Was Neva Sick, Ppl Like Tim Mcgraw Might Bite U" Hahaha nice shit.

Yo heat...
"And So You "Know Your Number 2" I Put A "Pencil To Ya Head"
Cause This "Kid Unprepaired For Stiches" He's "RUNNIN OUT OF THE THREAD!!"
Thats dope shit right there. You should have had more punches like this. I like iit alot, but Stanza came stronger

That Nissan Stanza line was weak imo.

Good battle though. You're both tight.

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Voted For: Stanza

I laugh at ur lame attempts 2 try make me look stupid
cut open ya chest n bare ya heart like bein naked wit cupid
wack
Yo moms call me up just to feel my bone..
She could sit her pussy on a beach so her crabs feel at home
wack
Your Sensin so Serious, But ur Text is Delirious
U stay On dicks like bitches who have sex on their periods
what…hell 2 the no
Hurt Yo Left Eye wit Dis Lyrical Content Burnin House Mc Lik U
Yo Shit Was Neva Sick, Ppl Like Tim Mcgraw Might Bite U
………..no comment

this was a wack battle…& heat ur structure was off like whoa…
and stanza…elevate please…weak-shit

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Voted For: Stanza

Flow - Stanza, was structured way better, which made it flow better cuz the sentences wew short and let it transition a little better

Punches - Stanza, both had some hot ones but Stanza got me wit

Yo moms call me up just to feel my bone..
She could sit her pussy on a beach so her crabs feel at home

clever, clever

Personals - Heat...if I assumed right me took the names of someones songs and flipped them...regardless of who's they are that is hard for me to do so I give people respect that do it lol

Multies - No comment lol

Vocab - Both were decent so I won't vote on this one

Originality - Honestly these were alright verses, pretty original wit the meta's and such...

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Voted For: Stanza

YOUR PUNCHES WERE FUNNY, BUT COULD POSSIBLY HAVE BEEN WORDED BETTER TO HIT HARDER, HEAT YOU PUNCHES WERE OK BUT YOU DIDNT REALLY PERSONALLY DISS HIM.
BOTH NEED TO LEARN TO AIM DISSES AT THE OPPONENT BETTER.
NO HATE PLEASE RETURN THE VOTE, LINKS IN SIG.

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* I need to learn how to Aim Punchez?*

Look at your record


Uppin for one more vote

And I Am RTF

Voted For: heat

GUAHHAHAHAHAHAAHAH THIS DUDE BIT FROM MY VERSE AT RF.... BAN THIS DUDES IP..

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