Voted For: Lay-Text

LAY-TEXT- Hmmm nice, you had good imaginary, with some decent creativity. Nice flow and good vocab in your verse. You came from a different angle, your piece was so original and so though-ful. Nice shit. Nice meta'z man, added some good decent images.


Golden day'z- Alright, you need to upp your vocab it was pretty weak in your piece. The imaginary was weak also, you had it, but you could've added some meta;z man. The flow of your verse was good. Then angle you came in your piece, was more like lay-text, but didnt do it perfectly. You had emotion, well, a little bit. Overall- good verse, not great nor weak just average.


Overall=Good writing from both of you. Lay-text you had decent meta'z with your imaginary, that's the only thing that stood out in your verse, plus vocab. Golden day'z the only thing that stood out in your verse was, emotion, it was good nor great just average. You need to upp your vocab man, the imaginary in your verse was weak, that's why i'm voting for lay-text cause he came harder with imaginary, with meta'z and plus decent vocab.

No hate, pz

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This is a crew battle THE JURY VS THE O.G.'Z and this is one of the battles it's a topical, and i like WISE TOPICAL HEAD'Z TO VOTE...........would you please RTF in this battle, HONEST VOTE. thank you

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Voted For: Lay-Text

Aiight...I've never voted in a topical battle before, so I really dont know how to explain the vote perfectly, but I'll give it a shot...

R, your verse was real good man...I havent really ever read a full topical battle, so this gave me an idea of what I've been missing...Vocab was really good, no need to work on that, imagery was great, you did a really good job on this topic...

Golden, I felt that your verse was a little too basic compared to his...vocab and imagery couldve been upped alot, but you still dropped a decent verse...No haet, but I gotta go with R

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