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Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio ![]() |
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1 | 16.67% |
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5 | 83.33% |
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: D3A2 4B25
yo
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 3631 0E72
Voted For: DA RIPPA
checkin this out............... think da rippa took this one...on account of better idea and alot more imagery.....E, you had a decent piece, but a little too basic, vocab could be better, and i wasn't really gettin any mental images.....but keep workin on it and you'll do fine.... E, thought some lines coulda been worded diff, some were a little simple, but for the most you stayed consistent, nice visuals created, strong emotion....nice twist at the end....keep up and maybe you'll be godly.....maybe, haha, word nice battle v rippa rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=186164 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=185292 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=187167 |
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