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Young Blaze 1 16.67%
White Powder 5 83.33%
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Old 06-04-05, 12:38 PM   #1
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UUUUuuupppiinnn.....an u dont want beef an u sayin ima bitch fest cause u came wack an cant see it......wow......Avoid me please an we will have a rematch jus cause i wanna merk u again.......
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Old 06-04-05, 01:45 PM   #2
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Lol wow d/r;z..................................uh uppin.
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Old 06-04-05, 03:06 PM   #3
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Voted For: White Powder

aiight...

yung blay:

Get Bagged n Diced & Young Palm The Six U Seenin It Spray
Cuz U Culdnt' “Blaze A Scene” With Arsonist At Theater Plays
aiight. 5/10
U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows
Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes
it's coo 6/10
U Like the Breeze aint no effect....Ya styles weak, u cant See Me G
Cuz im "Givin U The L, P" like handing out Free Cd's
oh, damn this was hot. 8/10
U as Hot as Useless Cookers I Stay wid Beef like Jewish Butchers
Shots Draw Red I'll Blow Ya Brains On the Roof like Toothless Hookers
nah, not that great. 4/10
Hyped From Ya Crew I aint gotta Write Fa U cuz me bein Nice is True
Bullets leave "WR On The Bench" like Jerry Rice Wit The Flu...
coo... 5/10

28/50... not bad verse... it flowed pretty coo. good job tho


Powder:

Young….
Straight off the top……………………..
you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence...
Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance..
it's coo... 5/10
Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments...
Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments...
haha nice. 7
I’m ill see; you are a “waste of lines”, no wonder my rhymes will “trash” you..
Bash you? even my “keyboard functions” attack as their known to “slash (/)” you..
lmao... dope 9/10
Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already...
4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..**
haha.. nice... 6/10
Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry..
Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.***
eh... not feelin' it much 4/10

31/50 overall tight verse. nice flow and shit. good punches. good battle. but v/WP
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Old 06-04-05, 05:32 PM   #4
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Old 06-05-05, 03:29 AM   #5
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you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence...
Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance..
5...aight, not a real hard hittin punch, but you did throw in a nice little multi in the first line.
Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments...
Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments...
7...LMAO!!! i never heard a line like the 2nd one before, the speech impediment shit was funny!!
I’m ill see; you are a “waste of lines”, no wonder my rhymes will “trash” you..
Bash you? even my “keyboard functions” attack as their known to “slash (/)” you..
6...first line was kinda gay, trash lines are so played out, but the keyboard functions with the (/) was nice.
Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already...
4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..**
6...decent wordplay with the flatline concept, also anothern ice multi in there.
Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry..
Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.***
6...aight personal, not a bad concept and i think you pulled it off alright, but cud've been better.

OVERALL: 30/50



Get Bagged n Diced & Young Palm The Six U Seenin It Spray
Cuz U Culdnt' “Blaze A Scene” With Arsonist At Theater Plays
5...kinda weak opener, the whole setup was choppy but the punch was nice, good wordplay.
U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows
Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes
5...again, the setup line was wack as hell but the punch was nice with more good wordplay.
U Like the Breeze aint no effect....Ya styles weak, u cant See Me G
Cuz im "Givin U The L, P" like handing out Free Cd's
5...NO!! ya losin it, givin you the L lines are fuckin played like fuck!!
U as Hot as Useless Cookers I Stay wid Beef like Jewish Butchers
Shots Draw Red I'll Blow Ya Brains On the Roof like Toothless Hookers
8...LMFAO!!! the setup was funny with the jewish shit, and the punch was hilarious!!
Hyped From Ya Crew I aint gotta Write Fa U cuz me bein Nice is True
Bullets leave "WR On The Bench" like Jerry Rice Wit The Flu...
6...nice closer, some more good wordplay and a little multi in the first line.

OVERALL: 29/50


werd....
nice battle...
powder, some nice shit from you, some of the best i've seen you do, you had the punchlines in there and stayed consistent throughout the verse, had one real nice line but overall all were relatively hard hittin
young...i dont think you brought ya "A" game in this one, you started off half-assed with wack setups and then good punches, you came together at the end, one funny ass line and you closed well, overall i think you weren't consistent enough in this battle.

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Old 06-05-05, 08:20 AM   #6
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Word uppin for more votes...............................
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Old 06-05-05, 11:42 AM   #7
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Old 06-05-05, 03:43 PM   #8
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bump this up...............................................
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Old 06-05-05, 03:46 PM   #9
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ah, i see W.P. back in text?...
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Old 06-05-05, 04:40 PM   #10
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Voted For: White Powder

White-

you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence...
Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance..

^^BLAH Streeeeeeeeeeeeetched but good start, made me laugh a little.


Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already...
4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..**

^^Man u could worded this differently but is ok...

Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry..
Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.***


^^this made me laugh....


Young-

U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows
Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes

^^Interestin...is cool punch and thats it the rest was fillers u fucka...


V/Wp i neva gonna read a text battle again....This was the weakest fuckin battle eva
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Old 06-05-05, 07:22 PM   #11
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Old 06-05-05, 09:08 PM   #12
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had to go wit WP....great word play...u both had iffy structure...but powders flowed better...he also had better metaphorz.."Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance..
Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments...
Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments..."...those 3 barz were dope as fuck....

blaze u didnt really show me shit in this battle...ur flow seemed off
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