this aont a muthafuckin draw....u just lost morse code...consider yoself merked.....

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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

damn close battle........

barz......
the flow was dope....structure was on point....creativity in some of the punches was high, i was feelin some of them, some nice personals on him....wordplay was there and it was dope, i feel that ya rhyme scheme went basic in places but mostly it was all dope....LMAO at the closer, that was a funny and original play on his name....links are played but i still checked them...better off explainin that shit at the bottom instead of linking shit.....overall....8/10

morse...
nice drop to....structure was good, i was feeling the flow all the way through...first thing to mention is drop the whole bolding names thing unless it has a point, from where i look it just seems like ya forcing shit.....ya wordplay was nice, a good personal on his picture to finish with, i laughed at that...creativity was there although you to were basic in places, need to stay more consistent with the hotness.....overall 7.5/10

barz edged it by a hair.....

V/ - Barz of Steel

RTF!!! battle links are in my sig.

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Thanx for voting man

Uppin This Shit............

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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

lmao. If thats dude, he look like darius songalia off tha kingz...lol..But down to business.

I think barz took this one with harder disses and harder punches. Even tho that christmas/gift wrapper line is played, i was still feelin tha rest of ya verse. i liked yo flow. It was easy to read because of yo structure. this was a pretty good drop in my opinion. You came consistent from tha beginning to tha end, and I felt you took this one.

Morse- yo verse was coo, but i wasnt feelin it too much. I think yo punches were a lil off point, and worded badly. I think you focused too much on personals, which took yo main focus off yo creativity in punches and everything else. Thats why i wasnt feelin yo verse. It was good, but tha personals that you tried to make sound funny/tight, didnt work. That's what failed you. But nonetheless, a good drop.

Overall- this was a close one, but i think it came down to one fuck up for morse, so my vote goes to barz.


No hate. And I'll brb witta link. RTF, or this vote will be ghost like casper, that friendly mu fucka...lol

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link in sig............................................... ...hit that up, and I will search for more battles by you, and send you tha money...you gota vote on it first, and pm me when u do!

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

uppin this shit!!!!!

Thanx for voting, and all favors will be returned..........................

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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

Ok diz wuz a close battle, heres my thoughts:

Ya rhymes is weak, please, don't try and fight with me
I'll throw ya "face to the curb", make you "bite the streets"
^played concept in da 2nd line

I like to beef, My nine'll close his eyes with ease
Or I'll clap five, in this wack guy, til his ass lies deceased
^not feeling it

Look kid, all ya shit is played....................................
because the only time you dealing with "heavy barz"
...............................................is when u "liftin weights"
^nyce concept, real good wordplay

I stay "above u".....................................like the "letter T"
So I doubt you will win, I'm sorry to have to clown on this kid
^nyce 1st line, 2nd line kind ov ruined it

But this dude's 14 years old and still sounds like he's 10!!!!!!! *
You're clashin with hell, I'll 'tear your ass' like 'bein smacked w/ a belt
Plus the "only time you could get a win is if you battle yourself! *
^good creativity in da rhymez, personal reallyhit harder, good job

This kid's a bitch, everything you create with a pen is shit
Come on man, I've seen better "(w)rappers" on "Christmas gifts"
^played

I'm sick with rhymes, so kid, you can't win this fight...........
Because ya "style has been played ever since your inventor died!!!" **
^really good closer, i aint mad@dat, proppz

Not da best verse, a few played concepts, da line wit dem personalz & ur closer hit hard, & they get u diz win, ur lucky Morse didnt come better or u wuld be see'n defeat fa sho man, good job though


this cats so wack that he had to cook stu and use black magik
to create barz of steel because he never before had em *1
^weak opener

you think you 'raw'? then im choppin you up like my names 'butch'
my verses are on 'fire' ! your 'godly' ?....................
......well if i sat you on my notepad id bet weed see a 'burning bush'
^ok wordplay, horribly worded

im 'burning this fag' like a straight 'cooking piece of cake'
'barz of steel' with the 'blueprint' shit he 'aint got it made'
^ur weakest bar

like owning 'a scarce penny' steel must not have 'common sense'
stepping to me with that? your crap admit it..............
...................even gave yourself credit to boost your confidence
^not da worse lines i ever saw, concept wuz good

im not hell raiser but yet i use pens (pins) to raise hell
its a shame he became 'barz of steel' just to have 'cells' (sales)
your 'flows about to be killed' cuz this is 'the last straw'
could never be 'raisin' chaos at all........
......like the attempts to lift a 'breast from grandmas'
^very weak barz, wuznt feelin them at all

this dude is 'shit' so stop 'sitting' around cuz im 'sending him in'
battlin his alias's is the only time he can get a win
^good personal, dat wuz ur best bar

hes astounded by my talent i got him branded with a loss for words *6
homie only has 'fake steel' and how you black magik...........
..........when you whiter than a jackson accident gon worse
^culd ov used dat personal alot better, jackson shit iz played yo

Morse if u wuld ov used wat personalz u had on barz 2 better effect, u wuld ov had da win, a few played lines, punz wernt strong, personalz were there 4 u morse, but juz da conceptz u used didnt hit hard, both came pretty weak, no hate ov course cuz i know yall sum talaented dudes, but my vote goes 2 barz of steel

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And Morse all of these votes are explained thoroughly, so don't think about being a nitch and getting them removed

Uppin this fuckin shit

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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

Barz took this shit with ease. Morse came alright in some areas but came with generic punches in others. Id say barz was more complex and had better flow than Morse Code did. Barz' opener was strong and it flowed perfect with the amount of multis and what not that he had used..

Ya rhymes is weak, please, don't try and fight with me
I'll throw ya "face to the curb", make you "bite the streets"

That was good. It flowed really well and it hit alright.

Morse you just had a few played bars and your verse had a pretty basic flow to it..a few multis but not many. Here is an example of one of your weaker lines..

s a shame he became 'barz of steel' just to have 'cells' (sales)

This didnt hit. Plus cells and sales is a stretch for wordplay. You should have had something different here.

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Basically, Barz Of Steel won this because of better wording and more creativity with m,ultis and flow.

Vote- Barz OF Steel

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