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Macreep 4 44.44%
un-fuck-widable 5 55.56%
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Old 08-04-05, 03:36 PM   #31
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Old 08-04-05, 04:20 PM   #32
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checkin the pollz.....................................
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Old 08-04-05, 04:54 PM   #33
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^^Nah vote...i wanna end his unbeaten streak already....LoL....
 
Old 08-04-05, 11:03 PM   #34
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Old 08-05-05, 12:57 PM   #35
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Voted For: Macreep

look dog you took it
breakdown:
flo=unf
creativity=macreep
personals=macreep
structure=macrreps is to small,but it was good
metas=unf
3/5 for mac
so vote:macreep

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Old 08-05-05, 01:00 PM   #36
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Old 08-05-05, 02:40 PM   #37
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uppin this merkage...................................
 
Old 08-05-05, 11:17 PM   #38
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Old 08-06-05, 06:29 PM   #39
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Voted For: un-fuck-widable

-UNF-

-UNF- got more points for stretchin his bars longer than usual
he was a little repetitive with the whole "ill" thing, but they are what saved his ass in this battle, he used a lot of punches as evry1 can tell overall this verse was good

Macreep

The only decent line in his verse was tha one about him being unfuckwidable in bed, his verse was really simple, sommeone who was new to the rap game could have done that, the rhyme scheme was aight, and the whole verse overall was str8, but not good enuff to win this battle

this vote goes to -UNF-
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Old 08-17-05, 08:33 AM   #40
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Voted For: Macreep

umm this was a real close battle...

macreep: you had some decent personals punches hit, they were worded pretty decent, structure was alot better than unf's.

unf: ive seen you do alot better man, flow was all over the place as was the structure. the punches didn't really hit as hard as macreeps, they needed to be worded better which was a flaw in your verse. personals were ight.

ok time to break down the verses:

macreep:

he's 8-0,but this hoe only loves battling herbs who lack recognition
battled the same newb 3 times in a row,talk about whack repitition
^^ decent opener, hit ok
only when he bones a chick,then he thinks he's got a winning-thread
chose un-FUCK-widable,cause that how his girl think he is-in-bed
^^ lol nice namweplay decent bar
leader of reality check,but he's still begging for some respect ,da rueist
only way he gets some bows in front him was if his crew was buddist
^^umm kinda played but it was ight, one of the weaker bars though
in his crew,OMB's in the roster,but neva repped it,nor checked
so i guess ya'll diggs neglects...like ya had some destitude pets
^^ not feeling this one...

you started off decent then it got worse. overall not a bad verse but ive seen you do better.

unf:

When He Said He Waz Ill I Hope He Ment The Flu
Trust Me Youll Never Be Able To Handle The Verses I Send To U.....*
^^ ok opener didn't really hit
You Got Kicked From Ma Crew Now u Beefin?..... Whats The Deal Wit This Kid
You Think You Ill But U Shit .......Jus Another Trinidad Bitch Wit No Niche....**
^^ don't get it
Your Lyrics Dont Even Make Sense....You Gunna Blow?Fuck Off For Goodness Sake When...
I Tear Apart Rather Then Break Men....Your Only Action Iz In The State Pen..***
^^ didnt hit him hard really
This Bitch Usin Shit Rhymin Wit Shit.....The Timen Was Shit....
Im Grinden Ya Shit.....Im Too Good Stop Startin Beef U Should Go Back Ta Ridin My Dick...****
^^best bar in your verse
Im Shootin Wit Clips At You Trinidad Bitch ..You Should Duck N Roll I Fuck The Dull...
Hollow Stuck In Your Skull Ppl Laugh Wen u Roll.....Thas Enuff Then You Fold.....*****
^^ok i spose needed to be worded better though
Im Ruff When Im Cold...Keepin Knifes Near Your Neck By Me...
You Succesion Iz Unlikely,Ur Only hope..........Iz To Bite Me.....
^^ ok. didn't hit very hard though
I'll Finish Him Off.....Im Ill To But Im Not Gunna Send Him A Cough....
I Knew Youd Lose You Didnt Have To Stall......ALthough It Waz An Eazy Battle In All
^^ ok again, you need better cpncepts
(YAwns.)..I Want Feelin Ill....My Flow Was Weak As Hell
But My Shit Still Killed Your Barz..As You Can Tell...^^ i dno if this was a bar but it was weak lol

ok. ive seen you drop alot better than this, your wording wasn't good, same with your flow and structure thats y i aint voting for you.

v/ macreep

punches and personals were worded better, structure was set up better aswell.

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Old 08-17-05, 09:50 AM   #41
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Voted For: Macreep

When He Said He Waz Ill I Hope He Ment The Flu
Trust Me Youll Never Be Able To Handle The Verses I Send To U.....*
ok

You Got Kicked From Ma Crew Now u Beefin?..... Whats The Deal Wit This Kid
You Think You Ill But U Shit .......Jus Another Trinidad Bitch Wit No Niche....**
nope not feeling this...

Your Lyrics Dont Even Make Sense....You Gunna Blow?Fuck Off For Goodness Sake When...
I Tear Apart Rather Then Break Men....Your Only Action Iz In The State Pen..***
i herd that 2ed bar on a song befor.....

This Bitch Usin Shit Rhymin Wit Shit.....The Timen Was Shit....
Im Grinden Ya Shit.....Im Too Good Stop Startin Beef U Should Go Back Ta Ridin My Dick...****
weak self glorification....

Im Shootin Wit Clips At You Trinidad Bitch ..You Should Duck N Roll I Fuck The Dull...
Hollow Stuck In Your Skull Ppl Laugh Wen u Roll.....Thas Enuff Then You Fold.....*****
nah...

Im Ruff When Im Cold...Keepin Knifes Near Your Neck By Me...
You Succesion Iz Unlikely,Ur Only hope..........Iz To Bite Me.....
nah again...

I'll Finish Him Off.....Im Ill To But Im Not Gunna Send Him A Cough....
I Knew Youd Lose You Didnt Have To Stall......ALthough It Waz An Eazy Battle In All
WTF?? and u 13-0?? this was weak....

(YAwns.)..I Want Feelin Ill....My Flow Was Weak As Hell
But My Shit Still Killed Your Barz..As You Can Tell...

yo im mad i had to brake down ya whole verse the shit was weak no effort no punches personal was kinda weak all around the only thing u had going for u was the weak flow and personal...

5/10


he's 8-0,but this hoe only loves battling herbs who lack recognition
battled the same newb 3 times in a row,talk about whack repitition
decent personal...

only when he bones a chick,then he thinks he's got a winning-thread
chose un-FUCK-widable,cause that how his girl think he is-in-bed
ok..

leader of reality check,but he's still begging for some respect ,da rueist
only way he gets some bows in front him was if his crew was buddist
decent...

in his crew,OMB's in the roster,but neva repped it,nor checked
so i guess ya'll diggs neglects...like ya had some destitude pets
decent ending....

i thought u had more creativeness to ya verse seem like u was more focus and all decent personal/punches all around average verse... 7/10

RTF PLEZ....
 
Old 08-17-05, 10:20 AM   #42
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Voted For: un-fuck-widable

yo imma have to go wit UNF on this one...his punches hit harder even though his flow wasnt that great...yo macreep u were madd git and had some hard punches but imma still have to give ma vote to UNF...yo UNF return tha favor and vote on ma battles against unrestricted,shadow and grimreapa(wen he finally checks in and drops his verse)...yo holla back at shyea boy...v/UNF
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Old 08-17-05, 02:12 PM   #43
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Old 08-17-05, 02:19 PM   #44
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Voted For: un-fuck-widable

UNF:
That was a very nice opening started your drop off very good very nice flow

Your Punches were okay but some didnt flow as hard as some of your other punches

You Closed it very good....

Overall Comment to UNF: Nice Punches And Flow was goood....some punches were a bit weak...

Macreep/Trini:
Very Nice opening but i think it was a bit weak.....very nice flow and composure in the first bar

your punches and personals were really good but some i wasnt quite feeling....

Very good Closing and also some nice vocab skills


OVerall Comment to Macreep:
Very Nice personals....you should try multies...it'll go nice with your personals...


VOTE: UNF
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Old 08-17-05, 02:55 PM   #45
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Voted For: un-fuck-widable

aight -UNF-
u came harder on Macreep than he did ypu but anyway
yo first line
(When He Said He Waz Ill I Hope He Ment The Flu)
This was funny and a good punch
he cam with more person and punches where Macreep
brought his battle.

(Im Ruff When Im Cold...Keepin Knifes Near Your Neck By Me...
You Succesion Iz Unlikely,Ur Only hope..........Iz To Bite Me.....)
nice lines u got him dere

(YAwns.)..I Want Feelin Ill....My Flow Was Weak As Hell
But My Shit Still Killed Your Barz..As You Can Tell...)
nice punch

Macreep u didnt really do so its was mo personals den punches
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