checkin polls and uppin' for my boy chip..........

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"i'm not deep, you're shallow..... rid of your women, money, power, greed, pride....... only then will you be truly free. i'm not asking you to walk on water....... just float with me."
".........you thinking i'm poor because i don't have any money, now that's rich."

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uuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppp, uuuuuuppppppppppp, and awaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyy.........

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
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Voted For: Sin`cere

Chip ~ Your verse was alright the emoitions was deep
but about from that I didnt feel u brought much to this
battle. Everything else was simply alright !! no hate !!

Sin ~ Come sic in this battle,.. Flow well dope the first
two bars smashed it... Vocab was ill, emotions well nice
I liked the morals of the verse.

Easy win for sin !!

Stay up both

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^not really sure i'm feelin that explanation...... plz don't judge my piece by the rhyme scheme, bcuz i wasn't even trying to rhyme, i just did at times out of habit...... this flows more like a spoken word....... bcuz that's basically what it iz..... uppin for more votes, but i ask all voters from now on NOT TO VOTE UNLESS U GET WHAT I WAS TRYING TO DO with my piece....... if i lose a battle, i want it to be a good loss..... not a oh, his verse was hot and yours was not....... just explain to me how u would've changed it...... uppin 4 more votes.....

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
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I aint judging you piece ! and from what I can see the other person who voted
on this battle said practicly the same thing.

I thought this was a topical battle ? Spoken Word is more poetry ? if this was
a Open Mic then maybe I would have looked at your verse in a different light
but your verse wasn't a topical and I'm sure most people will agree. So if I was
to judge this verse as a topical i'm sorry but it's not very good.