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10-12-05, 01:44 PM
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IP: 0D11 88C9
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10-13-05, 07:40 AM
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10-13-05, 04:36 PM
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10-13-05, 10:23 PM
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10-14-05, 04:04 PM
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10-15-05, 06:56 AM
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haaa..... it was poetry....... i assumed we weren't gonna have a battle about love........ oh well, uppin for more votes...........
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10-15-05, 06:52 PM
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10-16-05, 10:58 AM
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pain is weakness leaving the body
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uuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppp, uuuuuuppppppppppp, and awaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyy.........
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10-21-05, 08:11 AM
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Voted For: Sin`cere
Chip ~ Your verse was alright the emoitions was deep but about from that I didnt feel u brought much to this battle. Everything else was simply alright !! no hate !! Sin ~ Come sic in this battle,.. Flow well dope the first two bars smashed it... Vocab was ill, emotions well nice I liked the morals of the verse. Easy win for sin !! Stay up both 1~ |
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10-21-05, 09:23 AM
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^not really sure i'm feelin that explanation...... plz don't judge my piece by the rhyme scheme, bcuz i wasn't even trying to rhyme, i just did at times out of habit...... this flows more like a spoken word....... bcuz that's basically what it iz..... uppin for more votes, but i ask all voters from now on NOT TO VOTE UNLESS U GET WHAT I WAS TRYING TO DO with my piece....... if i lose a battle, i want it to be a good loss..... not a oh, his verse was hot and yours was not....... just explain to me how u would've changed it...... uppin 4 more votes.....
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10-23-05, 11:30 AM
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I aint judging you piece ! and from what I can see the other person who voted
on this battle said practicly the same thing. I thought this was a topical battle ? Spoken Word is more poetry ? if this was a Open Mic then maybe I would have looked at your verse in a different light but your verse wasn't a topical and I'm sure most people will agree. So if I was to judge this verse as a topical i'm sorry but it's not very good. |
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