aight, thank for the votes..........uppin for more votes.

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Voted For: Tech Skillz

You's My New Bitch, So You Coming Out With New-B Skills
We'd Like You....But You're More Played Out Than Movie Reels
ok line kind of played
I'll Lay Out The Retirement Mat And Let You Roll In Defeat
You Dress In B.u.m. Clothing.....And Think You Repping The Streets
lol this line was funny roflmao
I've Seen Your Last Battle Homie, I Must Admit, That Shit's Wack
You Couldn't Make Me Look Retarted.....Even If Left My Wrist Cracked
ok line nothing special
Can Tell You Like Ass And It's To Bad There's Nodody That Gives You
So When We Battle I'll Let You See The Moon.....
........And The Stars From The Punches I Give You!
lmao tight line
Wins From Herbs, Little Kids Who Get Wipped And There Diapers Checked!
You Couldn't Gamble With My Career......If You Decided To Place A Bet!
ok closer
overall you came average a few played lines but also some original lines
flow was ok a few strtched lines nothing major
wordplay was on id like to see more personals though

as i write this shit down i remember ur name
rvs hall of fame NO rvs wall of shame
ntoa good line
i could write down nothing and still of won
i beating u boy just like u were my son
playyyyyyyed
u think ur so wild, i'll call u the animal
u eating ur moms pussy, don't that make u a cannibal?
dumb line lol
ur rymes suck hardcore they remind me of shit
u shoulda realized from the start who u fuckin wit
a nobody?
u gotta remember the name j-c-r-e-a-l
ur lines are as phat* as the dog on taco bell
ok line i guess :/
my rymes so tight u can't fit ur midget dick in
last time u had pussy, ur cat u was a lickin
wack
overall you need to work on creativity everything uve dropped ive seen b4 flow was good aswell as structure simplistic rhymescheme and no personals or wordplay elevate

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