This was pretty deep,a bit played but nice subject matter, Ok Worplay and rhymes i wasnt feeling that much like that 1 about the queer. Nice flow and aight vocab
solid piece lad. keep writing

eborted verdict-C

illest piece

nice drop dude, it a cool drop
it tight an ill as a motherfuker




peace out

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yo nice topic, definitely something I liked... ill piece,... good flow, creativity ... this piece didn't need any vocab, just straight and honest
keep droppin
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