vote on this peeps, it's been slept on for way to long.
when ya done hit this up wiv an honest 1:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=domN8

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opener:dom
closer:dom
wordplay:forshadow
structure:tie
punches:dom
overall:dom


som took this with harder hitting punches, and for shadow, you need to use some different vocab, u seem like u just throw the odd word in here and there.


i took the time to hit this up, plz return the favor and vote on the battle in my sig.

aiight

peace

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OPener: Dom
closer: dom
flow: For
punches: dom
personals: eh tie. Too close to call
Hit this up with a vote please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93014

domn8 takes this junk easy...bars a little stretched out...but i can deal with that....other kids just didn't bring it....domn8's wordplay was better...i'll drop a poll when i get a few more posts....vote-domn8

this battl was striahg t both guys came nice forshadow your verse was aite but didn't really have good punches nor dom-n8 and dom makes your sentences shorter but you got my vote better flow overall~1