I really feelin this hommie. Good flow, nice rhyme scheme, word play was nice, and I was really feelin the Vocab. You could work on the chorus a little more. But it aint bad, so it aint nothin to sweat. I rate 9/10, very nice drop hommie. Tell me next time you drop somthing, so I can read it.

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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yo, i thought this was a cool drop... there was a line that i thought was cool as shyt....

My words aint spoken as you would think, they're rehearsed till everythings in sync
Every syllable is a link to something so distinct you'll miss it if you blink

that's hot as hell, duke!... the flow was pretty good... i started to feel it a little more as i got into it... but like the others said, shorten it up a bit.... it is a long read but it kept my interest til the end...

it's nice to see that there are still some real emcees out there besides the gang-bangers and thugs... keep that REAL hip-hop coming!

i enjoyed that Kuz... a allround good read.....not much else to say......allround 8/10..good shit Kuz

Good ass song it was really deep..............Much love homie do ya thug thizzo peace out vot one Dw Vs The Cobra for me please

this was tight dawg no gettin away from it! gud vocab n wordplay n still very smooth flow, also gud meanin, keep em comin i'll be watchin out 4 ur threads, gud read dawg, props to ya!

cud ya hit up my battles, dw vs cobra n the 1 in my thread, appreciated dawg thanx!

Damn...I wasn't expecting to get this kind of feedback.

THANKS Y'ALL!!!

very fuckin lyrical piece.........um...........very excellent vocab, good metaphors, similies, etc............keep rapping man, you gonna make a name for yourself

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Otherwise known as Artikulate