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12-11-03, 04:22 PM | #31 | |||||||
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Evolve slick writing i feel you one hundred percent.The whole us-of-a is becoming one nation against god. Its alright that the school system posts up pictures of a fat red suited pagan god other wise known as fucking santa clause. but you get picketed if you put up a copy of the ten commandments. And the supreme court signs that no longer can children say one nation under god in the pledge of allegience. To thank god on national television has become profanity on awards shows but you have fucking homos and graphic sex scenes on the next channel. shits gone to far never lose your anger on this topic because its one we should all b pissed off about. sorry im off my soap box now. plz check out my pz wisdom(posted it awhile ago might b buried) or a newer post second thoughts. Ok pz and luv.
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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17 16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases 17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him 18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper- 19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life 20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish |
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12-11-03, 05:01 PM | #32 | |||
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damn, this was nice. Flow was on point, When you was dissin santa, that was funny as shit. You opened good and ended good. Just exactly what I expected from you Evolve. You made a point in this piece. So nobody can touch you for sayin you're ungrateful. keep spittin that hot shit Evolve. Uppin for this nigga
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12-11-03, 05:17 PM | #33 | ||||||
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wow, nice job evolve. .
that was a good piece, and it brought a strong message. i also felt your vocab could have been better though. but im still nominating this for legends. we need it there |
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12-15-03, 04:11 PM | #34 | ||||||
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LOL ^^ i dont think it is legend material... but thanks anyway
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12-15-03, 04:22 PM | #35 | |||||||
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nice drop and very true....Never expected you to write this..I've thought the same way many of times...i liked it new and original thoughts...
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12-15-03, 04:53 PM | #36 | |||||||
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IP: C1DA C961
...hmm...creative...LOL...good flow...LOL...good topic...LOL...can't wait for your EASTER flow....LOL
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12-17-03, 09:44 AM | #37 | ||||||
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Dont Ever Reply To Any Thing I Drop On This Site Ever Again^^^^
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12-18-03, 01:47 PM | #38 | ||||||
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Excuse me for not typing much Evolve, but I have a splint and a tetnis shot from an accident in my shop class. Anyways, this piece was dope as fuck. I loved it, and being a faithful Christian I agree 150% with what you were saying. Multis were nice, flow was consistent, vocab isn't very important in my opinion but you used the right words where you needed it. The topic was nice to work with and it really drew my attention. I only wish it was a bit longer, but you really covered all the nessecary issues revolving around the topic. Overall this was an ill drop my man, and I'd love to collab with you sometime.
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12-19-03, 12:41 PM | #39 | ||||||
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Much Appreciated Aisle... Peace
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