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Old 10-24-04, 05:39 PM   #1
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I know Ya'll are prolly Busy But when is someone Going to get back to Me?....
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Old 10-24-04, 11:58 PM   #2
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imperialyou got good structure that is accepted by this site..!, need harder punches< better wit,
kin list..? you would make it but other then that you need better content...!
mistic rogue<<< no i would not vote 4 you...!
<cuz your to new n not enough experience...! srry...!
un'touched< let it be known your in but i don't LIKE YOU..!
<CUZ YOUR NOT LOYAL N REALLY AINT THAT GOOD
ex-ile<<you remind me of troop< you got talent but need elevation
keep it up n stay tryin out 4 da crew...get more active
king-dipset<<some decent shit but unfortunitly on this site
peeps dont respect new style< so modify it...!, n good luck..!
politikal panda<<bad rip off on the name but i think you deff got potential but you need to be more real in your drops..,if you got something with more feeling i suggest you post it, dont care bout the topic, jus make sure its a WOW...!
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these statements put forth are not those views of the council themselves but that of the individual that has made them...!
if you dont agree with them,..-go fuck ya self-they are meant as constructive critisicism towards the individuals mentioned..!
...oh ya n have a nice fuckin day...!
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

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Old 10-25-04, 11:07 PM   #3
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ok, well can i try out again when i elevate?
cuase i have only just join and i will get better
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Old 10-25-04, 11:19 PM   #4
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Yo, do y'all have a definate answer for me yet? I got some links from my 2 RB battles...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=151993
^That one's against Born To Kill

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=151773
^That one's against Booty Fan

Holla back at me, thanks.
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Old 10-27-04, 08:35 PM   #5
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yo da vinci check out my latest battle and tell me what u think...

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=156533

i havent been here long and have already elevated a lot. i plan on getting into audio aswell as text soon and am still workin mad hard to elevate more.
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Old 10-27-04, 11:34 PM   #6
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yo can I git in this shit be.......

if u dont take me you'll regret it.......
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Old 10-27-04, 11:37 PM   #7
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Old 10-29-04, 04:15 PM   #8
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Hey could I join the crew,

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I don't Prefer to brag, but I am quite the rapper,
If you accept me to ya team, you'll win alot faster,
I can merk some ass, I merk people in class,
I merk people slow, I diss emcees Fast!!!
I don't put up with people actin an herb,
I just walk by them Flippin the bird
Now If you dont let me in the crew ya'll is wack,
So, when you accept me, I'll be sure to write back!

That was a lil sumthin?... I dont know... am I in?......~~?

AM I IN !!~~????¿¿¿¿????¿¿¿¿????
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Old 10-29-04, 10:19 PM   #9
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What was your alias.
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Old 10-30-04, 08:11 AM   #10
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Theosophic-You are alright but you need to elevate a bit more.Get three more win's and tryout again
Trauma-You are with A.I unbalanced Prophetz but your Cool same as Theo get some more win's and come back.
DESTINY-Sorry but its a no,from me. You need to work on your Vocab,Punches & Wordplay your structure is fine but too basic.Again Elevate and come back.
Btw this is MY opinion not the Council's this is just my feedback-Don't hate On me i'm just giving you constructive critiscm.
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Old 10-30-04, 08:54 PM   #11
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yo i have elevated some and want to try out again. check this...

He's Denying reality............... and his ego is stepping forward
Either his verse was hypnotizing... or the crowd was getting bored
Kids electrifying............... questioning everything with "Wats"
He's reading reality double -he-he- -sucks-sucks- -cocks-cocks-
He's hunting victory..............but i remind him he's not loaded
He's weakening with every bar.... and is cleary Imperial Phobic
His pulse is flat.................. Cuase he took my Temper to far
He's so damn hungery.... cuase the only thing he bits is bars


get back to me ok
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Old 10-30-04, 09:07 PM   #12
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mistic you tried out like a week ago...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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Old 10-31-04, 04:21 AM   #13
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o well, fuck i just wan to join the council, its like the meanest crew!!!
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Old 10-31-04, 11:28 AM   #14
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well imma say the same thinhg as last time..
go get some wins n elevate with ya complexity n punches
then come back n tryout again..
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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Old 10-31-04, 05:12 PM   #15
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Alright good looks Daz...lets keep em comming.
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