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d.j em sce | 5 | 55.56% | |
FlOw InTeLLiGeNt | 4 | 44.44% | |
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02-03-05, 06:39 AM | #46 | |||||||
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d.j em sce 2 40.00%
FlOw InTeLLiGeNt 3 60.00%
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02-04-05, 10:30 AM | #47 | ||
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Voted For: d.j em sce
I'm going for d.j here. dj- You had a nice deep piece, more complex and the structure was on point. Nice vocab not over done, and it flowed well. flow-Nice piece, but too simple to me, good use of vocab and you told the story well. structure was good and appealing. But d.j. just had the edge. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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02-04-05, 12:39 PM | #48 | |||||
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~Nice poem you two i couldn't vote, was too close.......... i deleted my explanation cuz this is a tie... so good luck.. 1
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02-06-05, 06:13 AM | #49 | |||||||
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02-07-05, 02:11 AM | #50 | |||||||
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d.j em sce's Avatar Posts: 3,031 Joined: Feb 2004 From: sacramento Status: Online Text Record: 46-11 Audio Record: 7-2 Graphics Record: 0-0 IP: 4BB3 465C alright my name is SEAN and her name is SHEA (pronounced..SHAY) we broke up and now we are back together forever.... Sean and Shea forever Sentimental thoughts keep me reminiscing on the day we first met Every thought attacked my emotions, but still I try not to forget As our eyes locked I would soon believe in love at first sight Not knowing my heart would be broken, I kept your smile bright Approaching a new level in a relationship, it hurt once “WE” became no more Now that the truth was spoken I was wounded in a way I had never felt before Despite the demise to my first real relationship, you still are the one I adore Sensations would almost immediately grow stronger day after day However, I would hide my love but every night I would pray after Shea Exiled from my own passion, I would shed tears before I would sleep Awaiting a phone call that would guarantee Shea’s affection to keep Formulating a love that will last forever, I set my soul for this mission Obstacles lie ahead, but our love shall stop, as I await shea’s decision Reasonable doubt lingers on, as the question remains in her mind Extreme measures dwell in my midst, but love has left me blind, Visions of eternal love wonder in a maze, so this I must confess Ever since the first day, I did nothing for you but try my best Real love is what we now have, Shea I thank you for saying yes my SIG is not part of this poem but i wrote it just write now...it goes with this poem but if i added it i would exceed the number of lines i can use.... PS I LOVE MY GIRLFREIND __________________ are you still reading emials for free? ))SOUNDCLICK(( best audio battler of january vote for me Quote: Quote: Originally Posted by strobe Its good clean fun... but if you are beating off when you are sending me a PM, I don't wanna know about it! he posted that in a thread made about masterbation.. nuff said uppin
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02-08-05, 12:03 AM | #51 | |||||||
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upppin this shit..........where the voters at shit..........
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02-09-05, 12:43 AM | #52 | |||||||
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upppin this shit....................................
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02-09-05, 05:42 AM | #53 | |||||||
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u[[[[[in thias shit.............................................. ......
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02-11-05, 02:32 AM | #54 | |||||||
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uppin this weak ass battle................................
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02-11-05, 08:21 AM | #55 | ||||
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Aight, this was a pretty dope battle First things first, DJ, The whole scheme an creativity of ya Topic, was creative as hell, using your name an hers forever, an makin it all fit into place with the lines, thats dope, loved it, 9/10 for creativity an you kinda got my vote for that... Flow, cause DJ's topical was somthin diffrent, he gets my vote, but you came hard, stayed on topic throughout, right on point for the mosy part, just wasnt as creative, so my vote goes too DJ, sorry homeboy Both were deep an meaningful, but As i said many a times, DJ was a little more creative with his peice, so he gets my vote No hate an try an return the favor Vs spektikul, only battle i got open lol, Good lookin out y'all 1
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02-11-05, 05:14 PM | #56 | |||||||
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uppin for one more vote....................................
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02-12-05, 02:37 AM | #57 | |||||||
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woooooot wooooooot im winning 4-3,,,,,,,yes...........
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02-13-05, 05:23 AM | #58 | |||||||
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uppping this bulll shit
and remeebr if i win then i get 5 million Rv money
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02-14-05, 03:53 AM | #59 | |||||||
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yoyoyoyoyoyoyoyoyo uppin for votes
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02-15-05, 12:23 AM | #60 | |||||||
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damn this song im listening to is mad nice.....lol tight ass lyrics.....
but yeah upppin this battle
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