upp'in this shit.............................................. ......

can we get some decent fucking votes here???.....................

Voted For: intensify effect

everytime i called you out ya ducked n got offline...
fiend ya so addicted to crack u got a pac an tim roth shrine!..
wasnt feeling it

my texts'll make u blind but thats good cause ya raps are ass..
i'll brake ya rhymes like glass...
not feeling the 2ed line un-even bars but it was ok

an with just one of my punches ya seein double vision..
you should know never to try rhyming without proper hip hop supervision..
ok
i'm on a one man mission to help intensify your flows effect...
but theres no help for you like a penis that cant errect!..
weak penis lines like this are gaya nd useless

livin off past glory, ''violent types still on fire'' keep ya mouth ''canned''..
i'm some unsigned hype stompin you out an signin the partician to get u banned!
now that was a good personal if its true

i'll be damned if this dwarf gets the win...
like the afgan soldiers your gon go thru torture as i stick a axe to ya foreskin..!
decent ending



dopeman,
diss me?.. said i been ducking.. but i've been waiting for ya skill's to rech a settlement...
cuz i'll murder ya drop befor it happens,.. like shell' poping stomach.. during a fetal development... *ouch*
2ed line streched but preety witty

Don't care if you think you ill, your punches can touch me?.... hardly..
Wouldn't put ya "nuts on the table"... if you were hostin a... "fuckin party"...
ha i like that

Wanna ride my dick and battle ? Well,.... I bet you'll fall brother....
But please loosen up ya grip dawg,... ya hardness bearly fills a extra small rubber.... *ha*
decent

im rippen your ligemints in three N creamating the Remains Of ya physical.. basic....
so stop quickly ' My verbal Abuse is Metal bound like Rappers with Braces....
like the meta in the 2ed line decent

your more Herbish then "empire" in a pink slip, dog what type of Brain Patterns Are yours?....
your executed ' no props ', left hangin like Hinges on Large Doors...
dont know who empire is but 2ed line was decent

Im so Ruthless ' I'll switch your hearts Blood supply with Mental Confusion
Sending simple Illusions.. ' you get crippled an booted like handicap kids kicken an feuden..BITCH!!! *ha*
not a bad ending multis and a dent hit

i thought he was more focus and had better punches but a good battle it was indeed to see

Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::

structure dope
flow dope lol get it jk
rhyming dope
opener-closure tie
hits dope
multi dope
imagry dope
vocab dope

hit up on my link peace.

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upp'in this battle mang......................................

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Voted For: intensify effect

V/Intensify Effect.....very close battle but ima have to give this to IE cause he was more creative wit the punchs an his vocab was also good his structure on point....dopeman u had a good verse also but not as creative as IE in Punchs u had sum good lines but u weren't consistent wit the punchs......
punchs=IE
Vocab=IE
multis=Tie
Structure=tie
overall=Intensify effect
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::

well im gonna say this battle was wack....both of oyu need to elevate...alot

IE: you are alomost there just elevate a lil more.....none of oyur lines where good..none of oyur lines caught my eye........you had wack personals and you structure was nasty looking....work on punches adn metaphores...then personals...but first fix your structure..all in all...4/10

DOPE: you where far form dope....you need to elevate alot...the only reason why you one was becuz oyur structure was better than IE....you need to work on everything also.....i was bored fo your verse......add some better punch lines......and also up your vocab...


both you guys need to elevate and up your vocab...you also need to put atleast one nice line in both of your verse....


vote=dope

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^^^ how can u hate on they verse? when they verse was good but I.E made more sense and hit harder? atless show respect dont just blowen off like that it was a decent read