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06-03-05, 04:09 PM
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Wow at what this thread turned into
The only reason my structure could seem bad is cus i play on words like add-a-lesson/adolecent - obviously the 1 word seems like 2 throwing the structure off but if u read it correctly the flow is their Also i dont have generic flow that shits wack a ................................a a.................................a No i experiment adding it up a bit try perhaps a.........a..........a.............b b...........c........c.............b Try and play around with the multi's abit no what i mean people Appreciate constructive critisim but being called im wack!! no way u fucking dyke my punches are far more developed than ur mind can understand Paper cut ur eyes to show im winning by a margin Im sorry if u neglect to see the simple metaphor of me winning by a margin and also the sides of papers having margins on thm But im sure to ur pre-pubecent mind that just seems like mindless filler to u right?right? fucking immortal tech could come in and say burn an orphanage to bring heat to u bastards I imagine he would get the same fucking repsonse because ur simple mind is so fucking korrupted with retardness as u neglect to see past the genericness of ur un-developed mind Fucking bitch |
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06-03-05, 05:19 PM
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In ya area.
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Don't get mad 'cuz your verse was crap, just elevate.
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06-03-05, 05:34 PM
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It wasnt fucking crap though did u even read it no?
It was probably just above average at worse And no flow that just bullshit myb my structure alil streched that it tho |
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06-03-05, 06:26 PM
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In ya area.
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IP: 3358 DF00
This thread was based on the fact that your punches were wack...I was simply agreeing with that, so go elevate. That's what I did.
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06-03-05, 07:09 PM
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my alliance is with ganja
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yo yung nigga i see wurr aristica cumin from there
see your punches are weak and structure is shit now normally i dont bitch bout structure but its big on rv so get used to it up your punches and shit
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06-03-05, 10:25 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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^^ Thank you....so dizz your whack.....................word.
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06-04-05, 11:40 AM
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See i dont need to up my punches because im already elevated 2 levels above u arist
Even topically u look up at me Structure wise that critism is fine if this is just some wack generic site not open to creativity Bottom line is half of u dont understand metaphors and i wouldnt expect ur un-sophisticated minds to either |
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