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Voted For: Pen N' Paper

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Pen
Good Peice I Think That You Couldve done a Little better With Your Storyline But It Was Ok .........Far as your imagery Go its Was good and Your Structure was Neat................My Overall feeling of your drop I think It Was Good But It wasnt all that Nuttin Specail but It Was good enough to take this battle

Murdz
Your stroyline was kinda confusiing to say from the start but Yo Imagery was great but its Like thats all that you relied on Your vocab was decent like usual Nuttin extraordinary but decent .............I Feel That You Really messed up with yo Story in this drop nuttin personal But I dont think That you take this battle ....Srry

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Voted For: .Murdz.

A'ight this was a decent battle...

Murdz...dope verse...good emotion, nice vocabulary...structure was good, flow was nice...and your gawd damn metaphors...

"Rocking a chain-which-isn't-mine, waiting for my brain-to-get-inline,
The devils got my soul, the lord put a stain-on-my-design"

Very nice...very good drop...we should topical battle sometime...

Pen 'N Paper...decent verse...your lines were stretched as fuck, so I wasn't feeling your structure or flow...and your talking to me about vocab..? There are a lot of basic words in your verse...it was decent, I really wasn't feeling the emotion either...

My vote goes to Murdz because he had the emotion...and basically everything else...

No hate.

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Voted For: Pen N' Paper

standard topic. nuthin overly creative....

murdz.....you had a decent approach to the topic, i also liked the idea of switching from 3rd person to 1st person, that was quite original.....the delivery of the topic was good, you stayed on topic throughout....vocabs were impressive, there were some small parts where you outdid ya self but then some parts went a little basic.....nice emotion in your piece, you brought good imagery to the topic to with your words, gives the reader a picture as to what life in the ghetto is like.....first topical i seen from you, and it was good so overall.....6.5/10


pen n paper.....also a very good drop, as expected you stayed on topic all the way through and the delivery was excellent...the vocabs in your piece were very good, i feel you were more consistent with the vocabs in delivering complexity, i dont feel that you were as basic in places as murdz was....imagery in your piece was nice, as murdz did you brought a very clear picture to the topic and in addition inputted some real nice emotion which adds more depth to your piece.......overall 7/10

overall it was really close, both came real dope but when it came down to it i picked pen n paper cuz i felt that he stayed more consistent with the vocabs and didnt fall into a basic pattern as much.

V/ - Pen n Paper

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