|
|
|
|
| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
|
|||||||
| View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
| K-Trini |
  
|
4 | 44.44% |
| Pen N' Paper |
  
|
5 | 55.56% |
| Voters: 9. You may not vote on this poll | |||
|
|
Thread Tools | Search this Thread | Display Modes |
06-29-05, 06:58 PM
|
#46
|
|
WhoAreYou?
|
IP: A181 D033
Voted For: Pen N' Paper
This shit was real one sided. pen n paper took this battle without a doubt. His punches were hittin a whole lot harder than k-trini's jabs. pen n paper actually used personals which swung the battle in his favour from more or less the first line even. K-trini no hate but if you make you verse hit hard enough you really shouldn't see it necessary to wrap the ends of each line with "~"s pen n paper's verse had a nicer structure and smoother flow.and his vocab was a lot more elevated than k-trini's vocab. k-trini's verse was just too simple. Best line in this battle is pen n paper's line about K-trini's verse "shittin" (8th line) I was feelin pen n paper's verse a whole lot more so therefore i think he won this |
|
|
|
06-29-05, 10:20 PM
|
#47
|
|
|
Banned: Cheating
|
IP: F58B 029B
uppin............................................. .....
|
|
|
|
|
06-30-05, 10:34 AM
|
#48
|
|
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
|
IP: 0D11 88C9
uppin this fo mo votes yall
__________________
  STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
|
|
|
06-30-05, 01:58 PM
|
#49
|
|
|
Banned: Cheating
|
IP: 08FE 0AAB
uppin............................................. .........
|
|
|
|
|
|
06-30-05, 05:54 PM
|
#50
|
|
|
Banned: Cheating
|
IP: 61EB 54E6
uppin.............................................
|
|
|
|
|
|
06-30-05, 06:56 PM
|
#51
|
|
|
Business Not Personal
|
This was feedback posted for Pen N' Paper
IP: 6645 381F
checking polls......................................
__________________
 There's a lot of talk about whos the hottest, to be honest
hip-hop aint been the same since Tupac moved to Cuba on us! |
|
|
|
|
06-30-05, 08:21 PM
|
#52
|
|
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
|
IP: 0D11 88C9
uppin this cmon votes plz stopsleepin
__________________
STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
|
|
|
|
06-30-05, 09:25 PM
|
#53
|
|
|
Banned: Cheating
|
IP: 6AA9 3C1D
uppin............................................. ...
|
|
|
|
|
|
07-01-05, 11:34 AM
|
#54
|
|
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
|
IP: 0D11 88C9
uppin cmon we only need a few votes to get this closed down cmon now
__________________
STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
|
|
|
|
07-01-05, 12:45 PM
|
#55
|
|
|
Banned: Cheating
|
IP: 6F8B 7954
uppin............................................. ...
|
|
|
|
|
|
07-01-05, 07:02 PM
|
#56
|
|
|
Banned: Cheating
|
IP: 6AA9 3C1D
uppin............................................. .
|
|
|
|
|
|
07-01-05, 07:08 PM
|
#57
|
|
|
NO SURRENDER
|
This was feedback posted for Pen N' Paper
IP: 828D 0B7A
polssssss.........................................
__________________
|
|
|
|
|
07-01-05, 11:53 PM
|
#58
|
|
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
|
IP: 0D11 88C9
...................................up............. ....
__________________
STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
|
|
|
|
07-02-05, 12:08 AM
|
#59
|
|
|
Banned: Cheating
|
IP: A98E 66D5
uppin............................................. ...............
|
|
|
|
|
|
07-02-05, 07:05 AM
|
#60
|
|||
|
...Belong...
|
IP: B1A5 868C
Voted For: K-Trini
Pen 'N' Paper verse K-Trini u lacked skill, Livin Legendz didn’t want u cuz of ur stupidity I always knew ya were an idiot, but rite now ur showin me ur simplicity ^ Punch = meh...diss is there coulda been worded better though U rappin is like “Mic-heal Jordan” makin errors being a baseball player The way u win battles is by swaying and realize in fact that ur a failure ^ -_- not feelin this the diss is there but again no punch Man u “corny” I eat u up like “corn flakes” wit milk like you for breakfast Even “lunch” or “dinner” man ill be “serving” ur wack ass so u can take this ^ don't rhyme but punch is there but could be worded better K-Trini man ur a mini bitch wit a gurl name ur punches are not gon be hittin Ur other verses ive seen “stink like shit” whats the difference ur verse is shittin ^ meh...not feelin again So K just face it u gay and theres no way for u to win this battle no prospect Even in GFX, Topical, Audio and this in Text ill murk u cuz u just a speck… ^ weak closer no punch Overall You got the right idea wit flow and layout but it's the punches/personals all the important parts about text that you missin...use punches/personals there was none in this verse it was just filler disses were there but they were backed up by nothing K-Trini Verse Pen&Paper So obssesed on stayin behind ,you'd ~write-it-late~ And you don't like the pen's function.....you just ~like-it's-shape~ ^ lol good opener nice rhyme It's like I'm amputating on a nuclues,cause I'm~stoppin-his-growth~ And this bitch dun wanna rap,he wanna ram my~cockin-his-throat~ ^ punch played but there 1st line self-G but nice rhyme again You would neva get close to stars like a review on a bad movie Pen can follow ethics made by kin,but ya verse still won't move me ^ self-g blah Closest you get to stackin joints,is when you~pack-a-blunt~ Only time you loaded is when ya pumped ~back-and-front~ ^ ok closer nice rhyme Overall Easy win...punches were there hit reasonably hard...flow was good you had everything Pen&Paper didn't good verse. V/K-Trini...this is an RTF vote...no deadline set 
__________________
Quote:
^ Amen Brother ^
Quote:
R.I.P OMB |
|||
|
|
|
| Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Linear Mode
