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Old 01-11-05, 08:28 AM   #1
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^ok topic is lifes tribulations



Aight i only just see this. a quick verse below. Ended up going on a bit but its not bad:

Lifes tribulations

A quick short verse of the tribulations of life
If you really want to know ask Brad Pitt’s wife
Usually refer to you wife as trouble and strife
But shes split now, and shes fit with a hype,
watch all the famous guys going in for the swipe
Quicker than Twister spitting a well written rhyme.

I cant see how he could drive Jen round the bend
But She will survive cos shes still got her “friends”
Relationships break up, your left to get on the mend
The end is always around the corner, Lets not pretend

But the tribulation that’s on most of the worlds mind
Think of the worst natural shit today to happen to mankind
Unlucky people in Asia hit by the Tsunami big wave
By wave I dont mean the one you see at a football game
I mean the natural disaster where theres no one to blame
A damn shame, people left with nothing to claim
Who will Bush hold responsible and take aim?
Lets all be sensible, donate money for relief aid.

Personal tribulation, shit that happens fucking daily
spend 20mins at the bus stop waiting, aggrevated.
Bus finally comes get moving, arrive at the train station
Only to see the driver aint patient,
Hes fucked off and you weren’t even late!


Im gona post in the open mic and see if i get feedback aswel
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Old 01-10-05, 07:17 AM   #2
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check the battle wit bizzy...
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Old 01-10-05, 05:13 PM   #3
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um...well im from old RB...im still new in text but been told to have LOTS of POTENTIAL...and with the right crew and fam i can become really good...so how bout it fam...

Latest Battle...

Ya shit aint flowin must got hemorroids, must get annoyed...
when a girl tries to give you head you say your selfemployed...

your better off spitten lyrics for the deaf and the deceased...
especially the ones you caused for their heart rate to decrease...

you’ll never elevate from your level the way I got you underneath streets...
If ya went audio then they’d be like ya dick, ................both dead beats...

To show you love while bringin ya death, ill display ya mommas hearse...
You thought you were on the road to victory, cept your stuck in reverse...

Throw strokes of genius at ya to enlighten your life, begin your winnin strife…
Convicted of your murder, leave ya drowned in the flow like Scott Petersons wife…
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Old 01-10-05, 08:24 PM   #4
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nope ur in legendary mic if u weren't well thats up to DV
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Old 01-10-05, 08:28 PM   #5
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any feedback???
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Old 01-10-05, 08:33 PM   #6
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Old 01-10-05, 09:25 PM   #7
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damn you DV
lol its cool me and you go way back.......but no foos the jury didnt die....we still here and so am i....

word peace
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Old 01-10-05, 09:28 PM   #8
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^valor did you see what i posted in your forum...is there hard feelings?
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Old 01-10-05, 09:48 PM   #9
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ur gay....lol

u posted that in here and in my forum rofl
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Old 01-10-05, 11:25 PM   #10
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171543 <--battle link.

Innocence Lost


Petty imperfections ensure forgotten promises,
Sense of self is all gone, lost & anonymous.
Who wanted this? each day I take less & give more,
A common problem is overlooked until it is yours.
I only spit words, but don't disregard the inner message,
It's irrelevant as to who the winner & the best is.
Just a percentage & it seems to be misleading us slowly,
Always loyal to my friends, now it's even deceiving my homies.
Even i don't know me & I wonder why I'm still here,
Succumbing to popular demand is my only real fear.
It never feels clear, priorities tainted & off track,
The perfect picture I painted has faded & gone black.
Told not to talk back, freedom of speech is enslaved,
Locked away & we've swallowed the key to the cage.
In need of a grave & i'm sure it's been seeded & paved,
Hard to maintain when i all know is bleeding & pain.
So much for seizing the day, it's slipped & I can't grasp it,
This illusion of happiness was fun while it lasted.
But it's past dead & it's pointless to win at all costs,
I'm a statistic of an instance of innocence lost
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Old 01-11-05, 06:58 AM   #11
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check me out......................................i already posted hellaz but no on answered
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Old 01-11-05, 08:31 AM   #12
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ai is dead attmitt it lol
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Old 01-11-05, 08:33 AM   #13
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Is it dead. I didnt know. I was trying out the other day and they were still taking people but thats cool.
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Old 01-11-05, 12:10 PM   #14
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they wont let it die lol....naw, i hope A.I. stays but its been brought back way too much.
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Old 01-11-05, 12:52 PM   #15
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^ai has only been brought back once what are you talking about?a.i will never die we have albums out on the streetand big country aint you a biteryour opion means 0stupid bitch!!nighmare no dex we cool but no elevate imagine that was good are you a alais?pm me.
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