yeah im not trying to be a dick, but whats a heavyweight match without the champ?

not a heavyweight match thats for sure..........and i happen to think those votes were

just as valid as his............to each his own opinion

It just sucked you guys didn't get many votes, 5 isn't a lot for the battle when most here get a lot more than that, but I guess you guys should have dropped earlier then.

^^yea wered earlier more votes u get............

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I was out with my girlfriend all week. I'm super inactive cause I'm chillin with her before she moves off to go to uni..

Meh, I'll probably drop when Skriptz drops..

And Hotty, I still wuv you don't worry../I think my punch was better....

yep cuz i dropped early n im winnin like 9-0

yea im never droppin early again.....lol i got a black eye now^^^......lol

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lol i know.....n y u got a black eye???

o forget me u on about mi punch!!!!

fuck all that shit.... yo trust make sure i dont go agianst sum pud next week

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what's a pud? lol

Aiyo, anyone give me feedback on this verse i'm going to use at RB? I'm facing someone dope as hell. This is just a draft and a couple personals might not make sense, but here it goes.

Fuck you and ya small weener, my raps prove that I'm meaner
N' ya school never took ya on fieldtrips, so i'm taking ya to the cleaners
Better spend time on concepts or I'll slash ya eye sockets
But if ya have a brain dump, world pollution will skyrocket
Winning? You can't cop it, this joke will say what the worst is
What has no beginning, middle, or end? A doughnut and quote's verses
Kid's fillin' with curses, he's a sick fuck and not one to scare
Fag only let the cat outta the bag to kidnap a little girl in there
You n' wackness compare, seems tokens in arcades need order
N' if your the alien attack champ...
...............why are so many mexicans crossin' the border
Ya fucking wack, yeah I said it, ya dropped ass n' you'll regret it
Bitch, I could make a monkey out of you, but I don't wanna take the credit
N' ho ya better go n' roam or I'll be clippin' ya dome
But dawg if ya cry wolf, remember ya girl will run home
N' That's how it goes, you say peaceful? I think ya bluffin
In fact i know ya like war, cuz ya good for ABSOLUTELY nothing
Clown you ain't good for something, not even a good rhyme scheme
N' ya fall's been in the brewers so long, it'd bankrupt the team
You suck it would seem, and Kap and Born already made it clear
And I quote ... so why the fuck you still here?

nice... some off dat is real nice there was some fingz i dint get but people over at rb would... you shudda posted 1 of his battles to see what we can expect them compare em...

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Alright, well which lines did you like specifically and which do you think I need to fix up a lot or drop? Here's his most recent verse against someone else... also filled with some personals that won't make sense, but this shows what kinda writer he is.

more lines dont mean ya nice, i dont get what your point is
but thanks for the info..
..now do us a favor & get the link, click it, n' join it

Quote got things under control, my punches'll threaten him
bitch i'm behind the wheel while Jay Walkers under the rest of em'
i own you, i've had it w/ you dumb fucks n' skanks
bitch, you're only down w/ the rest cuz i'm movin up in ranks
know n' diss you by name? nah, im just testin ya health
i'll refer to you in abbreviations & have you double guessin yourself
JW .. talkin shit? man fuck this veteran imposter
& btw, i've had the last word w/ literally half of your roster
you wanna talk about LW? buncha fuckin lightweights
for your info ..
..ya leader begged me to join after I put him in the right place
thought about it a bit for spit, just to shut up the dude
& after this .. i'ma be the Last Word in ya sig - n' I aint joinin ya crew
sayin i got no life, you're fuckin ironic, dont even try to fight it
somehow you managed to drop 30 lines before i could sign on and realize it
i'ma bring ya whole life to the floor, ya date total dikes
wreck ya career & have Jay W. down like I was a motor bike
i hate wastin lines on wack heads, there aint nothin worse
didn't wanna spend 30 on you in the first place..
..& that was BEFORE i read your verse
fuck this fakin flake, i'll grip ya fuckin neck and crank it
& have dudes mistake you for Lynus the way i'll leave you attatched to a blanket
call us prejudice, call us racist, either way u should flee
bitch - you'll never fit in here, except foreign ya own league
you w/ a girl? nah, those views have long been tinted
& how you expect jay to get w/ the program..
..when not one person in it is interested
shit, you were born a cripple, you come bored n' wack
& i'd cut you from the computer if I could find the ambilical chord in the back
half ya verse was filler bitch, i could stitch 15 staples up it
in the future, dont try to go fuckin 30 if u aint capable of it

heres what i think...

Fuck you and ya small weener, my raps prove that I'm meaner
N' ya school never took ya on fieldtrips, so i'm taking ya to the cleaners
nice opener, but you could get it fit fit into the concept of cleaners more if u get me?
Better spend time on concepts or I'll slash ya eye sockets
But if ya have a brain dump, world pollution will skyrocket
^^ lol i liekd this bar, hit him hard
Winning? You can't cop it, this joke will say what the worst is
What has no beginning, middle, or end? A doughnut and quote's verses
lol, original... like it
Kid's fillin' with curses, he's a sick fuck and not one to scare
Fag only let the cat outta the bag to kidnap a little girl in there
lmao, nice concept and u flipped the phrase good
You n' wackness compare, seems tokens in arcades need order
N' if your the alien attack champ...
...............why are so many mexicans crossin' the border
lol, anuva original concept flipped nicely
Ya fucking wack, yeah I said it, ya dropped ass n' you'll regret it
Bitch, I could make a monkey out of you, but I don't wanna take the credit
i dont really get this one
N' ho ya better go n' roam or I'll be clippin' ya dome
But dawg if ya cry wolf, remember ya girl will run home
lol simple but effective
N' That's how it goes, you say peaceful? I think ya bluffin
In fact i know ya like war, cuz ya good for ABSOLUTELY nothing
nice punch here..... getting back on track
Clown you ain't good for something, not even a good rhyme scheme
N' ya fall's been in the brewers so long, it'd bankrupt the team
not really feelni this, dno y tho somethnig missing
You suck it would seem, and Kap and Born already made it clear
And I quote
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Originally Posted by Born To Kill
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... so why the fuck you still here?
decent closure, nice punch

ight there was some real nice punches in there and a couople that didnt make sense or i wasnt feeling, but other than that i would think you could take the battle with that verse i liked it alot good job man

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