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Old 11-03-05, 11:46 PM   #1
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Fuck an intro kid, you know what it is
fuck the he say, she say, its per say bitch

that was dope
props to Will Appear, I give credit when its due


You even spelled it wrong, its Per Se, not Per Say.

duh.
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Old 11-03-05, 11:50 PM   #2
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wow @ sayin willapear outshined........... she had real good clarity....... but i dont like that immediate come in
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Old 11-03-05, 11:55 PM   #3
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Yeah! SHIT! WOO!
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Old 11-04-05, 12:12 AM   #4
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i just listened to the track...... watsup with Kool and Spuls shit bein so low..... and Spul recordin his sleeptalkin........ and i dunno if it was my mixin or LE's... but my shit sounds alil too early.... like a milisec off beat/too early than from wen i recorded it.... willas shit was real clear and crisp.... easy to understand for the most part..... i really fuckin like ECs flow but i cant hear wtf u are sayin after the first bar or 2... LE comes in and im not feelin the lyrics, the present is nice.... im not feelin the flow... but its decent... u didnt shine, but u didnt suck.... Kool comes in way too low, his flow is decent from wat i hear, but i cant hear everythin hes hearin so well... ok, my shit comes in and my quality is really shitty in my opinion cuz i had to record with four dudes playin Madden 06 in the background and headfones that really seeped the sound.... i also have to duplicate my track like 30 times just to make it loud enough for this beat, lol.... but besides that, im likin my flow on it, but i think i switch it up too much for 8 bars..... ok, and than Spul comes in with a cutworthy performance, lol, jp man, but watsup??? overall i think most of our verses were fine on there own, but there were like 30 switchups in flow that it sounds real bad with one right after each other..... we should think about a hook, or tryna mimmick the flow of the person before u next time.... or atleast keep ur same flow the whole time u spit

we cant do much about quality....... but we should be able to work on the other shit

and i kinda agree now that willa did a pretty nice job with her clarity/quality and decent flow for the most part.... but ur wordplay was too hidden for the most part... aight there ya go
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Old 11-04-05, 12:25 AM   #5
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^^Word.

I did my shit quick...cause my throat really cant handle recording right now. Im not even supposed to be doin it.

But Col-B mixed both of your verses...

I didn't mix shit other than SPuL's.
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Old 11-04-05, 12:38 AM   #6
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thanx for the props lol
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Old 11-04-05, 12:39 AM   #7
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props to everyone who dropped though on the real
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Old 11-04-05, 12:39 AM   #8
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bout to check y'all sjyt out... good luck guys... werdage.. PER SE al up in this Biyatch!!!!
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Old 11-04-05, 12:44 AM   #9
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yea im going to listen to squad a's in liek 5 mins
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Old 11-04-05, 12:44 AM   #10
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quality onm some verses was a lil off but y'all brought it together pretty well... i ain't hear the other teams shyt but i think either one of us got a good chance at beating them dudes and broads over there.... good shyt... holla back
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Old 11-04-05, 12:51 AM   #11
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omfg, roflmao @ Spul's verse
I got the headphones on, and I listened to that shit, I BROKE out laughin

"got to do what i got to do"

lmfao
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 11-04-05, 01:11 AM   #12
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my shit iz low cuz my moms wuz home n shit, lol, so i couldnt b az loud az i wanted 2 b. n ROFLMMFAO @ spuls "verse" *dies* omfg, i just listened 2 it again, BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA, omfg rofl, most hilarious shit ever, werd
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Old 11-04-05, 01:13 AM   #13
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I spit my shit while my moms was home to
thats why I wasnt amped, but I still managed to add some emotion and variation too it
Imma start rappin like that from now on, cos I used to think I have to be yellin to have emotion
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Old 11-04-05, 01:16 AM   #14
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all 4 of my sisters were right by me when i recorded lol and my mom was asleep o nthe couch shit sucked lol
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Old 11-04-05, 01:19 AM   #15
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^lmfao
the same place my mama was sleep at
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