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View Poll Results: Who got this battle?
Stanza 5 62.50%
Big City 3 37.50%
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Old 05-24-05, 05:04 PM   #91
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Voted For: Stanza

stanza, you should just retire, but don't copy Mase
or you'll get ya " sideburned" like Ashanti's face
thats not a punch....

you appealin to none, stop talking, start concealin ya tongue
cuz ya chances of winnin are about a million to one
ok..

ya feelin me son, ..im poppin hate in my jams
treat u a ya crew like Jews, and "concentrate on ya camp"
ok...

im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit
no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch
decent word-play.......

how u gon put me up against this punk phony Stanza
im about to show him "whose the boss" like i was Tony danza
nah played as hell.......

you small prick, how could a clique wit all dicks
be SO DAMN PUSSEY, did u get ya balls ripped?
nope nope!!!!!..........

aww shit, dont try and star, you'll get maligned and scarred
he cou'ldnt get an explosive verse, wit C-4 in ya lines and bars
ok...

u at a loss for words? thank god!, did ya verbals desert you?
niggas' will b askin "Where you at?" like a boost mobile commercial......its nothin dog
ok ending....

1st off u went ova the bar limit which hurts u it aint help, then ya punches wasnt that hard hitting or celever, u need more focus, and follow rules... it was decent but need more RAWNESS ADDED WORD...




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You Think You Gonna Be the One To Put A Lost On My Wins
You So Soft Id Bring My Knife & Kill You With The Plastic End
kinda raw decent...

No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt
Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work"
ha i like it...

Big City Must be*Dead Crap*Bcuz Im Known to *RIP shit*
BC battle on Phones so match Numbers & Letters & Call Quits
nice word-play N hit... took a sec to get it.....

you must "Lust-For-Death" I'm "Dusting-Ya-Rep Hold-It-Son
U Know I Won Facin' me is like "Russian-Roulette"..............
ok ending could of went harder...

but u had decent punches that connected and u follow the rules so im gonna ovte on just the 8 lines that soopuse to be there and stanza took this one sorry if stanza would of match ya line by line he got this in the bag nice battle fellas and focus more ya next time....
With *fully Loaded-Guns*

Done You Betta Not Duck This time
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^^ holla at me if u wanna join....

DUCKED = RED BULL * LOL WHAT A LAME *

last battle K.O ~christyles~ 5-0

whos next!!

 
 


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