Yes, i liked ur vocab and multi's in it, jst that it kind of seemed like you rushed it alittle. Alot of people when they hear their songs think that its really good, which gets in the way of improving. I'm not sayin u suck, cuz u don't, ur very good, n i know that. Just that instead of makin it good vocab and stuff like that, try to make the song something that you would bob your head too

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Aight...Yea I Was Kinda Thinking That Myself...

I Want To Elevate To The Point Where MY Songs Are On The Intellect Level of Cannibus and Flow Like Talib Kweli..

:-D..One Day

~R~

can i spit on dis?

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

word at talib's flow.....damn that some high ambition....i like that

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man we should have a big crew, i say let all three of them in, it'll just make everything easier ya dig

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It's Not A Crew.....It's An Audio Group....A Serious One To Get Heard With...

Poll Mayn....What You Think of Da Song? You up To Drop On it?

~R~

When there's a open space in this, holluh at me, cuz but that time, imma have 10 tracks out

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aight ima hope on this track r-rated......ill have my spit done by tomorrow afternoon

NiCe Nice...

I Hope It Turns Out Well...

~R~

i wanna hop on dis shit as well, ima spit tommorow, holla at me

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

yo i spit a sample of my verse on my soundclick page. this is justa rough draft of my verse, cuz meth wanted to peep it lol
so holla at me

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

yea its dope 20 but let me spit right afta r-rated......cause i got an idea for that spot then just spit fire on tha rest

I'am Rerecord My Verse, and Fill In All The Hooks So My Parts Will be Complete...

Then It Will Go New Method......Then 20 Grand.....

My Finished Part Will Go Up On My Soundclick, Then Meth Record On It, Post It Up On Your Soundclick, Grand Record On It........Post It Up.....(That Will Be The Finished Version)

I Will Make A Band Page For Soul 2 Def......Put Some Finishing Edges On The Song...and Post It Up On Da Page.

~R~

ight fo sho
this is gonna be tight mayne

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs