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Old 08-20-05, 10:33 PM   #1
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Old 08-21-05, 12:33 PM   #2
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up up up up up and away..
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Old 08-21-05, 01:52 PM   #3
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Listenin.......

Great concept
I totally feel you on da topic!!

Lyrics- Great, but very short, you had me goin, and then just stopped
Beat-fire, wat's good wit a remix
Flow- Your a singer, so it doesn't matter, as long as you can sing, which you can
Delivery- perfect for this track


overall
9.5/10

I really like this track, I'd bump this on a reminisant day!!

I think we should collabo on a rmx!!!!
I think I can add some spice wit some nice rap lyrics in it!!!!

It's up to you tho, after all it's ya song!!!!!
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Old 08-21-05, 09:09 PM   #4
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ahahah tha chorus sound like some bone thugz and harmony typa shit ahhaa its all good...the beat is str8....the track makes perfect sense so i give u propz on dis shit big time kuzz i aint got tha ballz to sing ahahha shit im strickly rap....its str8 i like it....damn i feel likeim being nice lol but i cant complain so good shit
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Old 08-21-05, 11:27 PM   #5
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word thanx fam.. uppin for more feed
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Old 08-22-05, 12:25 AM   #6
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You better give me a copy of your album for free homo.
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Old 08-22-05, 10:05 PM   #7
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lol dont worry i will...
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Old 08-22-05, 10:17 PM   #8
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ima leave some feed son...

lol the singin..=\

damn whole track is singin..well u need some help on the singin bruh..lol..nice try tho..just not the right note..IMO..pretty short tho..but yea like i said just work on the singin..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204756
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and if u wanna keep singin..my girl suggested a pitch pipe..it will help u get ya pitch right son..
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Old 08-22-05, 10:30 PM   #9
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lol singin needs work but im not gonna knock you for tryin it was ok lil track nothin real bad about it keep droppin man =1=...
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Old 08-23-05, 12:26 AM   #10
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yea im listenin to this
The beat is straight for the type of song. Damn why the whole song is singin, man you cant sing lol. At least you was bold enough to do that. You shouldve spit on there, you kno real fast bone thugs sorta flow. But I feel where you comin from on the song tho man. Its not somethin I would listen to
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Old 08-23-05, 12:41 AM   #11
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Can you leave feed on this thanks 1
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205666
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Old 08-23-05, 05:08 AM   #12
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damn man, you like kinda sing on this one fa sho, dont say you didnt it does sound like it, anyway it was good man nice sound good lyrics nice flow good emotion but you do have a few pops in ya quality but its cool keep workin hard man, but i really do think you should stop doin tracks about girls and love man try and get into more like reality and life. anyway good track man

rtf in me n tizzles collab "rich gurls"

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Old 08-23-05, 10:40 AM   #13
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Yo like always, I always liked your Music, Never one to Knock it, This one is not your Best, But Far from your worse, But Yah Flow, Lyrics and Chose of Beat were All on Point.. Your Signing Needs a littel work, But Nothing Time wont Heal.. Good Joint..

Please Return some Contructive Feed on the Joint in My Sig..
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Old 08-23-05, 07:32 PM   #14
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man i got hella feed to return hahaha.. lol o well.. but thanx for the feed fam.. im rtf rite now
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