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Old 03-12-06, 01:22 AM   #1
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Why Do The Battle Grounds Suck?

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I had a guy ditch on me once again. I really don't wanna let another verse go to waste so feel free to critique what I wrote for my supposed-to-be challenger:

You the slave, I'm the whip, strikin ya ass
Left foot's on the ground, the right's in ya ass
Got a feelin he don't feel like beefin' today
He a puzzle piece - I'll put the piece in it's place
Got 'em on the run, but I'm not needin' to chase
Reel like a fisher, you I'm eatin' today
Got no dick riders? Damn, where yo crew went
They left his ass, when they heard he had no Nucentz
Climb to the highest montain, still can't top me
Sorry to smash ya, should've told you I squash beef
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Old 03-15-06, 08:57 AM   #2
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Your lucky he didn't turn up !!

Liked this line:

They left his ass, when they heard he had no Nucentz

Rest was rubbish wasn't feeling it at all.

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Old 08-31-06, 10:26 AM   #3
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Drop 2 Links Or This Shit Will Be Closed...( If You Get Caught)
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Old 08-31-06, 10:53 AM   #4
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This isn't the place for sub-par battle raps

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