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07-26-04, 01:36 PM
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fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: EFC1 5411
thats shit was long as fuck goddamn man but yo nice drop couldnt see n e thing really wrong wit it nice story n u kept wit it nice drop yo peace out keep droppin 1 luv holla back
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07-26-04, 03:42 PM
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IP: E671 DE1D
Im the most honest person on this site i think... Yo A... This is what i think... Emotional drop... Feeling that part... But again... Ur strucute is some of the whackest on the site... Shorten ur lines... Do what you need to do... Ill help you if you need... PM me...
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07-26-04, 03:44 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 426C 02AF
Young dat shit was pretty deep though.. i was feelin it. Nice wordplay in that over all id say "chea" too dis. 8/10.
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07-26-04, 03:53 PM
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IP: A001 97D8
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I'm Trying, Each Piece My Lines Get Clipped Just Alittle Bit... I Just Use To Many Multies... And I Gotta Put That Long Of Lines To Keep The Schemes Moving... And I'll Check That Piece Right Now Playah... ~One~ |
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07-26-04, 04:20 PM
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IP: 9B36 B767
Nice Drop Man...Nice Use Of Internals|Kept The Flow On Point|Structure|Switched Up At Times|But I tend To Do That Too|Nice Drop|I Like the Emotion In This Piece|Nice Imagery|..Overall:8.7/10..Round Up if ya Want.
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07-26-04, 06:08 PM
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IP: A001 97D8
Thanks Alot...
Upping For More Feedback... ~One~ |
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07-26-04, 06:12 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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good drop here A i like the wordplay
work on ya structure some and that would of made it perfect but you defenetly have skill my brotha i like this piece alot yo Good shit
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07-26-04, 08:20 PM
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Thank You, Come Again
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IP: 8D48 2106
damnit why u gotta ruin my open mic chances
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07-26-04, 08:43 PM
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IP: A001 97D8
Lololmao...
Homie I Shot Down That Possibility When I Dropped "Beyond The Bullit"... This Shit Is The Icing On The Cake... Just Securing My Spot Now... Between "Beyond The Bullit","Fighting To Live", And This Piece Something I'm On Should Grab The Open Mic Of July... Plus I've Already Got Some Pieces I've Finished In Advance For August... Maybe We Should Collab And You Can Get In On Some Of The Glory... Haha... |
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07-26-04, 08:48 PM
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IP: E671 DE1D
August is mine homie... (and Enygmas and Village Pimps) But check my new one "Fuck with Chryme Sindicate?"
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07-27-04, 09:53 AM
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IP: A001 97D8
Fasho...
Lol And, Me Shadow And Forgotten Flow aka Yung Duke's... Shits Mos Def Gonna Be Something Special... And I'll Check Ya Rhym... ~One~ |
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07-27-04, 05:15 PM
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IP: A001 97D8
Upping...
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07-28-04, 10:45 AM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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emotion dope vocab if u work on the structure thisll be a really dope peice overall id say 7/10 u got mad skills just work on the structure
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07-28-04, 10:56 AM
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yO this was some deep shit. honest to god some of this shit had me thinking
i could see the picture you was painting clearly."tears spray off her face as my years fray, momma asking why as i whisper dont fear pray" that line stood out the most to me. the hook is good, not as good as the verses, but good i give this piece a 8.5 cause u might make it better. " If life's a test, what you gotta do to pass? who decides when you fail and whats the name of the class? how many credits is it worth? Im ahead of my verse, If Heavens up in the clouds, why they put us in the dirt? hotshh |
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07-28-04, 03:20 PM
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IP: A001 97D8
Thanks Alot People...
Upping... |
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