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04-03-06, 11:56 PM | #1 | |
God is a Fable.
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IP:
I really liked this.. very original and havent seen anything really like this on here.. the emotion was good could have been a little more solid but the imagery made up for the lack of emotion in parts.. your vocab was average and i liked your choice of short lines and stanzas.. very nice..
RTF on one of my piece either "Oppertunity Knocks" or "A Forgotten Tune" |
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