verse 1

Uh, huh… Verbal Atrocities Manifested, Mic-Nificent 2003 Straight Out The Gates…

It’s the attack of the meanest, assassin and genius//
Why can’t these fuckin’ clowns just loosen their grasp on my penis//
I’m rappin’ with demons to have you gasp when your breathin’//
Enigmatic the only man in the game that’s lackin’ a weakness//
As the passion increases, you’ll get laid in a casket with Jesus//
The hatchet is reachin’ to crack your cerebrum; ‘cus you’re whack when your speakin’//
Said you’re trashed and your beaten, blasted with semen, and now your contracting diseases//
Play my tracks in a sequence, you can't tame the hurricane//
The flames are burnin’ lames, and I'll slay your vertebrae//
Been trained to murder brains, contain strains, stay insane, and snatch the chains of certain “gangs”//

verse 2

Yo, yo…

I get the crowd groovin’ with this foul music//
Drop sick shit, like Oprah having a bowel movement//
Loud new shit, Enigmatic the king, no one is comparing homie//
Got a dick so big, all the bitches are scared to blow me//
The new era is slowly, creepin’ up, then I slam foes//
’Cus I’m better than Rambo, when I shoot sparking ammo//
I’m the type to “godfather” a blunt with Marlon Brando//
Verbal commando, teams be stressin’ with this speech injection//
’Cus the only way they’d get bread is if their girls had yeast infections//
Get beat with weapons, ‘cus my skills are properly funded//
And I’m celibate in this rap game, ‘cus I’m not to be fucked with//

yo thats tight son fa real i liked it alot remined me of Canibus nigga

Good lookin' out. I was tryin' to go for a quicker rhythm. Keep uppin' this shit.

Don't sleep on my thread... keep uppin' it. Y'all missin' out on some hot shit.

thats not to bad niccah.
you had a continous flow but some lines had no meaning.
most lines was rymin but wasnt consistent enough.

OKay....
THIS WAS WACK......nothing to make say "wow"....


No sense like the fake ass mc above me said...
example...

"I get the crowd groovin’ with this foul music//
Drop sick shit, like Oprah having a bowel movement//"
??????????WACK!!!!!!
Example...
"Verbal commando, teams be stressin’ with this speech injection//
’Cus the only way they’d get bread is if their girls had yeast infections//"
???????WACK!!!!!!

work on it kid

Peace.....
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Ps:......i hope no hip hop tours ever goes to D.C. u should never.....be inspired by rap....ever u wack bitch.... face it...

... nah man... yous can't say that... whack!... nah... yo man, I think you got Dislexia or something^... reading the shit backwards and shit...

Yo kid, you actually came up strong on the first verse, had some nice rhymes, tight flow, good multies and shit, it had a good rhythm... but then u slupped a bit on the second, some of those rhymes didn't make sence... I liked this one though> "only way they’d get bread is if their girls had yeast infections//" that was a funny one... keep writing dawg...

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yo, I liked it... which means it had some strong points.. but it also had some pretty fuckin' weak points.. you got the potential fo-sho but you gotta work on consistancy and such....

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