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Old 05-18-04, 01:58 PM   #1
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Aight, Just Some Quick Shit For Yall To Peep. It's Short So Yall Peep It And Leave Some Feedback...


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I'm Quick To Leave A Phony Emcee Beaten And Twisted.. ~1
Spit Sick So Believe I Got These Cats Fiendin-To Listen.. ~2
Take A Hit Of This Weed God I'm Breathin This Shit In.. ~3
Got A Bitch On Her Knees And It's My Seamen She's Kissin.. ~4
Crush Ya Like Tick On My Sleave Have Ya Screamin And Kickin.. ~5
And I'm Itchin To Feed These Weapons So I'm Heavin A Clip In.. ~6
Lip Off The Police And Watch Um Use Coke To Season The Victim.. ~7
My Deamon's Is Trippin So All Opposition Left Bleedin And Limpin.. ~8



Aight, I'ma End It There Cuz I Know If I Make It too Long Cats Aint Gon Read It...
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Old 05-18-04, 02:29 PM   #2
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Old 05-18-04, 02:32 PM   #3
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yeah ok...good mutis' ..but let down by the content of ur vocab and wordplay....wld have been soooo dope if only it had nice words...but not bad for a newb..u no wot ya doin..just work on the vocab bud..eat a dictoinary of sumfin..lol

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Old 05-18-04, 02:48 PM   #4
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gotta go with homie...dont get me wrong..spit was sick...vocabulary is the key...you have potential to be the illest if you up your vocab....nuthin but love.....peace
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Old 05-18-04, 06:30 PM   #5
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na fuck that if that was audio it would be perfect

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Old 05-18-04, 06:51 PM   #6
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vocabulary is da key??? get da fukk out of here fukkin white boy's....yo dunn ya free was hott dont listen 2 dem niggaz look at norega dat niggaz dumb but her signed with def jam so fukk dat vocab shit
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Old 05-19-04, 08:07 AM   #7
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Yeah I agree, fuckk vocab shit. It's da punches you need to worry about. Ya flow was good, and had sickk multis, and I know you got punches, but it's plain to see you was holdin backk on em (coz I seen some of ur shit b4 wid crazy punches).

anywayz nice shit dawg...
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Old 05-19-04, 06:15 PM   #8
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Good Lookin On All The Feedback. As Far As The Vocab And Punches Go, I Was Really Just Tryin To Use Multi's But I feel Yall, I'll Try To Include That Shit Next Time. One.
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Old 05-20-04, 12:49 PM   #9
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Old 05-21-04, 09:52 AM   #10
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Old 05-27-04, 02:19 PM   #11
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Uppin 4 Feedback.. Wake Yall Asses Up RB!!
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Old 05-27-04, 02:44 PM   #12
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sik, nufink ta elevate on..........dat was safe hun....keep rhymin
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Old 05-28-04, 01:03 PM   #13
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man, fuckin heat!! multies were crazy, keep the shit up
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Old 06-11-04, 03:49 PM   #14
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Thanx dawg, appreciate it.
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