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Old 11-17-05, 08:03 PM   #1
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Your Fate!!!!!!!!!!!

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Song: Your Fate
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Looking for some constructive feed, no hate please.. will return the fav with some good feed..

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Old 11-17-05, 11:59 PM   #2
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aight i'm peepin now

Production:I like the intro too it it sounds like u goin into battle...its pretty coo-9/10
Flow:The flow is pretty good.....ya rode the beat all the way through-8/10
Pressense:ya it rode well the whole way throught it was cool-7.5/10
Emotion:You need too put more emotion and it'd be way better-6/10
Lyrics:Lyrics are pretty decent...it aitn too bad-8/10
Overall:this is a pretty cool song just up ya emotion-7.5/10

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Old 11-18-05, 02:15 AM   #3
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you gotta leave links man. keep that in mind.
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Old 11-18-05, 06:45 AM   #4
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links added... thx fo the feed man.. much appreciated
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Old 11-18-05, 04:18 PM   #5
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word uppin for some feed..............
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Old 11-19-05, 04:42 PM   #6
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upppin fo some damn feed up in this bitch
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Old 11-20-05, 01:24 PM   #7
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once a day bictch..................................
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Old 11-21-05, 06:24 PM   #8
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Old 11-21-05, 06:27 PM   #9
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im not really feelings this one track man....the flow and shit is just....not my style but its NOT BAD i assure you that man....but your lyrics arent that bad man, and the beat isnt my style either but like i said this isnt a bad track its just not my style man...

but nice drop and keep it coming man...


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Old 11-22-05, 08:52 AM   #10
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word... thx for the feed..........................
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Old 11-22-05, 09:21 AM   #11
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B-Mac = Canadian Leady...you sound too much like him...production is aight but ya verse goes real low, hooks drowned out by the beat...flow's ok...rides the beat...lyrics aight

good track jus production side lets you down in places...

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Old 11-22-05, 01:36 PM   #12
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aight listenin....

Beats Nice a lil too Mainstream for me Ha ha underground beats are better...

Flows Nice

Qualitys Aight

Work On Your Production

hooks too low but meh

i like ya first verse best sems to get a lil boring but its a nice track

deliverys good

presence is nice real confident

Overall 8/10

thx for checkin my track
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Old 11-23-05, 10:20 AM   #13
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word.. thx for the feed people.. i'mma get at you when i get out of school and got some speakers
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Old 11-26-05, 01:47 AM   #14
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my bad for not leaving feed right away got caught up

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The beat is straight,lyriks is koo not anything ammusing but they straight,delivery is koo could be alot better,effects were pretty good,mixin is nice,flow was koo,quality is str8 this track was pretty nice but not my style feel me but yeh man its a hot drop homie keep dropping this shit like this homie and get recognized.
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Old 11-26-05, 02:16 AM   #15
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dope beat. good flow. lyrics r aight, average tho, n by that i mean 1 sylable. chorus iz koo. sumtimes i have trouble makin out wut ur sayin tho.

rtf pleeze, help a fellow scotian out, lol

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