u stole my chipmunk to sing the beginning of the track!

Did you pay him?


1st dude hit the mic while recording....

beat is ok

flow is pretty decent


vocals need to be amped though
yizzer


Inter...u came in way to languid...up that emotion on the 1st few lines...hook the listener in

ur lyrics were pretty cool

I like how u did some of ur dubs


ur delivery was monotonous at spots

decent track that's promising


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