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Old 05-06-05, 06:09 PM   #1
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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2133621

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2133616


juss a lil freestyle i threw together, been gone for a minute wit the audio buh im bac

beat= made by me
production/mixed= by me

im actually lookin for a collab on this beat, so if you down, holla at me

http://www.rideinconline.com/jamroo...&mode=song_hifi
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Old 05-06-05, 07:05 PM   #2
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ill beat.......had some real sick punches........liked ya flow was pretty nice over all



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Old 05-06-05, 07:30 PM   #3
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thanks son good lookin,..................uppin.................... ........................................
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Old 05-06-05, 07:36 PM   #4
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ur beat makin is gettin betta homie........as is your quality...a free? how comes u got adlibs etc lol..lyrically its nice some nice lil witty line, u got a swagger about yo flow, which is dope...ur flow is on beat flawlessly, u gettin nce on the mic...ohhh its nice when the beat cuts 4 a sec n u rhyme acapella n kik bak in..shit was dope n worth a dload..im fellin dis beat da more i listen..ma gun smoke so much ud think it got cancer lmao...nice



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Old 05-07-05, 12:32 PM   #5
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good lookin son, thanks for the feedback, i got u ...................uppin yall
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Old 05-07-05, 01:54 PM   #6
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is hard to imagine this was a free has adlibs..lol but beat is aight...missin some strings here and there...

first time am hearin yo voice u sound yung, punches was pretty good......adlibs could be done betta but u kinda sound like that kid wus his name i forgat it now..lol

overall ok track
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Old 05-07-05, 02:28 PM   #7
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it wasnt a freestyle, freestyle, buh it was verses i had juss put together off the top and shit..........good lookin though, ........................uppin
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Old 05-07-05, 03:49 PM   #8
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Beat is nice enjoying it lyrics were pretty good too

voice overs should be taken out not considered a freestyle maybe a prewritten

nice quality flows good too
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Old 05-07-05, 04:39 PM   #9
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ite ite, good lookin............................uppin
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Old 05-07-05, 06:56 PM   #10
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lyrics are dope. beat is doper...what beat is that? but, ad libs werent all that, which made yo verse sound kinda off...and u sound kinda low in volume. fix that next time. but voicing is coo...i like it!


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Old 05-07-05, 11:07 PM   #11
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thanks man, thats actually a beat i made..................uppin
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Old 05-08-05, 01:45 AM   #12
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Uppin..............
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Old 05-09-05, 04:39 PM   #13
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if u did produce this beat by urself this is pretty dam nyce u gonna have to get at me with one sumtime lol.. flow is on beat. sum parts u struggle but u got a good voice just needs to be developed . lol my fav line was tha guns are ready to dump like theyre constipaded... i like how u end it too. good shyt famz peep my shyts sumtime homey...

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Old 05-11-05, 04:26 PM   #14
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ite son thanks .............................Uppin................ .............
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Old 05-11-05, 05:48 PM   #15
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yo, rtf on truth hurts if u can bruh... if not thats straight... ima peep ur next drop too tho cuz this was nyce
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