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08-01-06, 01:22 AM
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Within Eternity's Wither
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Silence Of The Wolf God
IP: 28AD 5545
Silence Of The Wolf God
(One With Myself) In my sorrow I’m drowning, I’m all alone, my surroundings Of darkness, silence, reflection, even so its astounding Voiced the echoes reminant, courses of speckles amazement Dust the settles arrangement, restless souls lie impatient (The Creature Approaches) Silver streaks through the trees, upon the leafs of the breeze Paws pressed to the soil, claws seemingly brief and un-seen Creep'n with ease, stealthily moving, in seek of the pleased Rich in its reads, steps cause prints to seep in the weeds (No Visual...It Draws Near) Dense and present, immense, this suspenseful presence Since the sense has lessen'd, I smell it's stench its essence Fear drenched affection, no peers or hints direction Sear lift I’m left with, veered in and left prints (I See.....A Sight Worth While) Drown the thoughts, found to shock, I’m proud in spots Bound in dark, hound or not, brave down in locks Coated even, such a poster that no impostor should wander Just quietness, lone surroundings, and listen, its such an honor (..Silence..) "Let Us Be Silent, That We May Hear The Whispers Of The Gods"-Emerson.
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08-01-06, 01:22 AM
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Within Eternity's Wither
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2808603 Kill That Faggot http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2808610 Minimum Wage Word.
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08-01-06, 01:22 PM
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IP: 777B 65FF
Yo my dude I was feelin this cuz it wuzz something I can Read and picture @ da same time And dem Multie's wuzz sick Nice wordplay Structure wuz good straight and ya style'z wuzz Killing Im feeling dis one and Mr Multie Im givin u a 8.7/10 cuz dis wuz a rippin peice ~1~
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08-01-06, 09:06 PM
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Within Eternity's Wither
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Ups for feed.
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08-07-06, 01:22 AM
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Within Eternity's Wither
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IP: 0825 899A
Uppin for feed.
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08-07-06, 03:49 AM
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Above Originality
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IP: D40E 67D5
Silver streaks through the trees, upon the leafs of the breeze
Paws pressed to the soil, claws seemingly brief and un-seen Creep'n with ease, stealthily moving, in seek of the pleased Rich in its reads, steps cause prints to seep in the weeds (No Visual...It Draws Near) Dense and present, immense, this suspenseful presence Since the sense has lessen'd, I smell it's stench its essence Fear drenched affection, no peers or hints direction Sear lift I’m left with, veered in and left prints (I See.....A Sight Worth While) Drown the thoughts, found to shock, I’m proud in spots Bound in dark, hound or not, brave down in locks Coated even, such a poster that no impostor should wander Just quietness, lone surroundings, and listen, its such an honor (..Silence..) ^^ from there on i LOVED the piece was short yet was direct and was very blessed with nice wordings and nice evolved writing. the multies and metas were nice and very well thought of my dude very nice overall!.
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08-07-06, 05:21 PM
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Within Eternity's Wither
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IP: 3240 794D
Thanx
 need something feed'd on
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08-09-06, 04:12 AM
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IP: 4285 81CA
That was nice!! Descriptive skillz... very deep son.. very deep....
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08-09-06, 08:43 AM
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Black Poet
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IP: 0939 25DD
Dope !! really like the inners,... it gives your verses dope flow !! really
nice wordplay and multies ! This was nice I really liked this bar,... Dense and present, immense, this suspenseful presence Since the sense has lessen'd, I smell it's stench its essence Dopeness defined !!!! great drop keep em coming fams 1~ |
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08-12-06, 11:46 PM
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Within Eternity's Wither
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IP: 0825 899A
Thanx Crit. continue to feed people continue to feed
Werd.
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08-16-06, 12:10 PM
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Within Eternity's Wither
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IP: 0825 899A
Uppin for feed....im dropping to get another HoFer Piece Added
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08-16-06, 01:07 PM
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IP: 8C16 07E6
Now this peice right here is HoF worthy. Nicely done,
Malice (If thats your RB name). I loved this peice man. It had the wordplay. The flow. the Creativty and Imagenary. The plot. It had every thing t make a perfect peice. 10-10. Keep writing and let this make HoF. |
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08-16-06, 07:03 PM
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Within Eternity's Wither
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IP: 0825 899A
Yeah thas my RB name and im possitive i kno who you are wats good Lex
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08-16-06, 07:06 PM
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IP: 8C16 07E6
Nm man, how are you?
Get me a Aim name and shit so we can chat  |
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08-16-06, 08:24 PM
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Within Eternity's Wither
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IP: 0825 899A
i'll make you one now...
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